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Reppin Legendary Mc'z (freestyle #7)
Legend mc’z is the crew I’m reppin, fuck wit us and your dreams will come to a dead end You think you in first place, kid like Canada, legend mc’z will bash you down to second Feel the bloods we eruption, like weird paintings, we’ll make your body an weird complex We’re taking your lungs, your breaths, your life, your soul.~! We eat herbivores like t-rex You’ll lose your eye sight like ray for looking at this hotness text, feel our wraths in audio Our spits are Ear-radical feel the BEATS EFFECTS We’ll make you see an archeologist Like eclipse we block hotness, take an paper and bash it into your head, feel the paper thoughts Your life comes with an fee, roll with us, or get rolled on our tires are not de-flateable We the legend, we the past and the future get shook cause your looking at an ghost We taking care of imposters, bring us the problems we’ve got an solution for you hoes~! |
10 minutes typing, holla at cha boi for some feedbacks.....
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Bitches. Leave me some feedback's, Hoe's............
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kinda tight, a lil strectched,vocab was of the sheeze in places and some of the similies were tight but got damaged cos they were a lil stretched...im not gonna giv dis the full props it deserves cos ur reppin a crew lol nah j/p its tight 4 a 10min key..........overall -8/10. Peace fam
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Acuity is right about the structure but besides the stretched out parts it was good
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O alright thanks for the feedback homies..................
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