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Rar One ::vs:: Ballistik
Ayo...
Infinite Amount of Bars! No Groupy/Dickriding Faggots Votin'!!! No Crew Votes! Explained Voters Voters need 200 post to drop First to 5 3-0 is a K.O. MUST USE THIS 1-10 SCALE... Metaphors/Similes: Punchlines: Multisyllable Rhyming: Vocabulary: If you don't understand one of those ratings, you don't deserve to be able to vote!!! Also, i take the right to DQ a vote if its fucked up, but ill explain why, ill also be fair.. Good luck son.. *edited to add in the part about putting up 30 points* Ballistik's Verse Ayo.... I slice~through~his~eyes cause I like~to~defy 'n ignite~Rar~One, This bitch ass emcee's gonna learn that BuLLisTiK's nightmares~stun, His stupid ass at age 23, born on 1/12/79, I hack through his vertebrae 'til it bends back; let's let~it~recline, His facial features 'n his rhyme skills gotta pathetic~design while I raise the roof on this foundation as if I was ta domestically~climb, Ayo...mah rhymes replenish~divine skills that theoretically~bind, True skills that make him battlin' me like standin' weaponless on enemy~lines!, BuLLisTiK eats foes from head ta toes; raw~'n~rare, Stress comes from battlin' the best; dass why I leave ya with dislodgin'~hair, Brought up your birthday; now ya gon' need first~aid plus a lot more than common~care, 'N you can keep runnin' ya mouth but sooner or lata, I'ma leave ya jaw~impaired! So keep fuckin' around...nobody can rescue~ya~ta~family, I'll leave ya with every virus required ta destroy ya molecula~anatomy!!!! Do ya feel the burning sensation? It's over! [color=red]Rar One's Verse[color] You aint got hair on your nuts ~ its just ya Balls-Stick// nigga aint crazy ~ make me mad ill show you ballistik// Verse's like Pamela Andersons breast ~ ya styles fake// You Get Baked ?~ Only if your fuckin with Shake//(shake n bake) Cats a vampire dieing ~ He should know whats at Stake// upset the way i always call you homo ~Screamen Oh No when i hit him cuz ask'd to give my dick a quick blow// This nigga thinks he has black roots ~ because after he showershe rinses with charcol// Typing metaphorical applications ~he's readin gay mags jackin tips on masterbation// I guess fucking bitchs is one of many of your unfufilled limitations// Only thing stinking worse then his flows ~ his mothers clit// This cat needs a dictionary just to find the meaning for it// {{switch styles}} i got a design to take over your mind so your ass know's your mine// lyrics combine and intertwine with gun powder to create a verbal nine// having your morale decline worse than students at columbine// |
yo aight. I was feelin ballistik's verse more. I loved the multies and the punches that were in there.
rarone had some pretty good punches too, and a nice overall verse. bestlines True skills that make him battlin' me like standin' weaponless on enemy~lines!, that was nice 'N you can keep runnin' ya mouth but sooner or lata, I'ma leave ya jaw~impaired! that one was hard too Cats a vampire dieing ~ He should know whats at Stake// that was nice having your morale decline worse than students at columbine// that line is overused, but it was still nice my vote= ballistik cuz his verse just seemed to hit a lil bit harder. |
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Metaphors/Similes:6 Punchlines:5 Multisyllable Rhyming:8 Vocabulary:7 His rhyme scheme was good and his verse hit pretty hard. Quote:
Metaphors/Similes:4 Punchlines:3 Multisyllable Rhyming:4 Vocabulary:3 Your verse was lacking. It wasn't hittin' hard enough. I'll break it down why more if you want. You should be able to look at it and tell why but if ya need more, just ask. Vote=Ballistik |
god damn, i hate fucking newbie voters..
The only person i even though about counting was nef, but one do you even know what a punch is, or a metaphor for that matter???????? God damn, upping this shit for VET VOTERS one |
...Don't have to use that scale to be a vet...so, here's my explanation.
Battle was one sided to me, I think Ballistik got the battle by far, his verse had more multi's, punches, and some vocab, and all of his bars...well most matched, and Rar One, your bars were stretched and had too many fillers, that's my word! 1ne. My Vote=Ballistik |
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Ballistik's stats..
Metaphors/Similes: 6 Punchlines: 6 Vocab: 7 Multisyllable: 6 overall nice verse your personals were hitting the hardest throughout the verse the multis made ya verse shine punches were so&so could of used more thought decent vocab Rar One's stats.... Metaphors/Similes: 7 Punchlines: 7 Vocab: 5 Multis: 7 this was a decent piece you were lackin heavy on vocab but the flow to it was hot the multis were pretty ight some punchlines i was feeling others i wasn't but overall nice piece My vote is obviously :Rar One i just felt he applied more to the battle in overall lyricizing 1 |
rar, fuk that scale shit lol...
i vote the way i want to :D n-e wayz... ballistic's verse wasnt that good at all compared to RAR's... wtf is uo wit these NEWBIE, HERBISH, DIKRIDIN kid's on r.b now days... im seriously SICK of it... rar had betta MUlties by far.. way betta meta's.... and ryme scheme was definitly betta... your bars should be lenghtend a lil tho in my opinion... ballistic...you~think~doin~this~is~gonna~make~you a betta rapper...lol....its hard to read, plus its really not needed.... vote=rar one... nice batle to the both -$- |
Both Came Weak As Fuck..Blah..Rar One You Are A Newbie Man So What Are you talkin About..?
Balls Stick - Your Verse Was Aight..Nothin Special..Below Decent..Your Flow Was Ok..You Had No Good Punches.. Rar One - Your Shit Was Below Decent 2..You Had Like 1 Good Punch..Your Flow Was Off At Times..But U Atleast You Were Kinda Decent.. Overall - Both Came Wack..Blah..Whats With These Newbie's Gettin Votes And Shit..And Levithan Is A Honest Voter..So He's Coo..Overall Rar One Should Get This..So blah..There U Go.. Vote - Rar One |
vote:Ballistik
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Balisstik
Metaphors/Similes:5 (ain't really see that many, the few I did were aight) Punchlines:7 (I was feelin ya punchlines a lil more, kinda carried ya verse) Multisyllable Rhyming:8 (you did aight with this shit) Vocabulary: 7 (nuthin great, but aight) Rar One (when you switched styles your shit got nicer) Metaphors/Similes: 8 (really feelin the vamp line n overall shit was nice) Punchlines: 7 (felt yours more than ballistiks but ain't hear nuthin great) Multisyllable Rhyming: 9 (them last few lines had beautiful flow and great multis) Vocabulary: 7 (nuthing special) vote= rar one if y'a'll could vote on my shit vs. Tad Lucky or Silent and Deadly or Intrin Sic that should would be nice, I'm gettin slept on, I make sure and vote on all y'a'll shit in the future. |
any fuckin' idiot that said that I didn't win the Multisyllable category is a fuckin' moron and doesn't know anything about multi's...
I rhymed like 3-5 syllables minimum...his multi's were basic and I mixed mine up with several words and broke it down... He rarely and I mean RARELY went over syllable...my vocabulary was also much more immense...none of those votes count...at least any of the votes that said he won the vocab or multi category... Regardless I won though... |
UGGGHHH...
ANY PERSON THAT VOTED FOR RAR ONE IN THIS THREAD IS ABSOLUTELY FULL OF SH*T... BALLISTICK'S VERSE WAS WAY MORE COMPLEX AND RHYMED 5 TIMES BETTER...LOL "YOU GET BAKED? ONLY IF YOU'RE F*CKING WITH SHAKE" :rolleyes: THAT WAS THE GAYEST SH*T A PERSON COULD THINK UP...LMAO... |
vote-ballistik....... his shit wus hotter wit out a doubt......i mite b a newbie but even i cud recognize dat he won dis shit.....
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LoL I win.. sorry bro but look at the rules.. You had ONE person that could really vote.. Not to mention all my voters are explaind fully, and high in post..
Still good battle.. came down 5-1 im out tho one |
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