2.30 Faded Freestyle
 

was /am still faded- heard a beat-freestyled-link 2 sclick in sig-drop sum feed

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168474
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168012
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sounds like your reading your freestyle... in parts. Some of it is pretty decent, a couple standout lines- quality needs help- check audio assistance thread "everything you need" and look down the list under cool edit... use some of those tutorials it can help ur quality... keep droppin..1

why do you have those links in your thread......

listening.......nice vocab.......it does sound like you are reading

quality is really bad........pretty weak btu just keep elevating....

sounds liek you reading again.......

are you sure you are freestyling it sounds liek youu reading......

it Does Actually sound like your reading and ya quality is not good.. you have your vocals to high for your beat.. you prolly got the red marks in Cool Edit when you mixed ya track down... yo need to take the background noise out too... the beat was nice, just work on production the quick things to check for before you mixdown a track should be in the audio assistance section.. but other than that, not a bad freestyle.. ya energy was good..

yea, this sounds like your readin.. and if it sounds liek your reading, theres a .11111% your actually freestyling lol...... it aight.. for a freestyle, its aiiight.. cause when u freestyle your flow is supposed to shine.. cause bassically your just focused on flow, and the lyrics come second.. thats a natural reaction when freestyling.. unlike when u write, lyrics are focused on more, and flow is sacrificed...

second half sounds liek u sorta freestyled..and it was better.. but i mean, it w/e.. its strait for a freestyle...nice thoughts.. keep droppin

Quality is meh....beat os nice....catchy type shit....this is good
for a freestyle....lyrics are coo....emotions is good, and your
presence is good....flow is pretty ok....one lil slip...but yuo started back up nicely....good job man


please peep
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172631

beat is ok, u def didnt freestyle, cuz def sounds like u read no doubt, it was very long and fast wif alot of words. hard to belive especially cuz it sounded like u read it

Work On Emotion And Flow And Youll Be Dope I See Alot Of Potential In You Sun For Real But I Told You This Already Pretty Good Overall Once You Fix That Yull Be Dope Fo Real;)