B o X t vs PredKiller
 

Battle Rules:

15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-05-05 at 02:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

B o X t has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-03-05 02:07 PM.

Iight..


In Ya Verse Yu Just Spread Fillers, BoXt? Im Just Dead Iller /
Ill Send This 'Alien' Back To The Planet He Came From..'Pred Killer' / (alien vs predators)
Yu Dont Wanna Fuck Wit Me Cuz I Got Two Techs Who Wreck Thru Vests /
Sumthin Like A Clothing Companies Protections System To Thefts /(them lil sensors...in a vest..)
Boxt..Im A Mind Merker, Who Will Walk Up On Yu With A Bat And Define Berserk /
And If Yu Didnt Know...I Throw Punches Like Capri Sun Assembly Line Workers! /
After This Battle..Give It A Min And Look At Pred..Gaurenteed Yull Find Scars/
And No Im No Kind Of 'Justice System'...But Im Puttin This 'Killer' Behind 'Bars'/
Ima Leave Yu Torn Ripe, I Got Sumthin 'Four' This 'Pussy' Like '4 Dikes' /
Cuz Homie Ya 'Click Is Gay' Like Tryna Log On To Homo Porn Sites /
Now Ima Snap N Bend Yu, Cuz Trust Me Yull Get Clapped N Then Yu'll /
Stay High Like I Grabbed The Rim Dude, Medicade.. The Government Will Hafta Lend Yu /
Why?... Cuz In This Battle Preds Gettin Fucked Like Half His Men Do /
Lyrics Are Gonna Rip Thru Him, Ima Leave Dude On His Back Like His Bitch Do Him /
Preds Like A Dude Who 'Hates Closed Spaces'..Cuz 'BoXt' Is Gonna Get To Him /

PredKiller has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-03-05 07:41 PM.

You cant rhyme cuz ya don’t think outside the box
Stuff you in and wrap it, put on some locks
Cuz when you get a vote, you be ridin da cocks
Now don’t think that you is good as it gets
Cuz all that shit you talk aint a promise.. just threats
When you get merked to bad, ya pants get wets
Now put that book of rhymes back on da shelf
Cuz all yur doing is dissen on yourself
Stop saying you can rap and freestyle
Cuz all ya shits stolen, ya gottsa stock pile
All you do is talk but you cant walk da walk
And I know ya aint thug cuz you drop da glock
only a matter of time till everyone find out ya whack,
I already said you aint a rapper, let go of ya nut sack
Still think ya good? Man, you must be on crack

uppin 1 for votes.... give honest votes plz

Voted For: B o X t

Opener:B
Vocab:B
Wordplay:B
Metas:B
Punches:B
Multies:n/a
Flow:B
Structure:P
Humor: B
Creativity:B
Closer:B
Vote- B
It was obvious

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vote in this battle please
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uppin for votes... never read ALL the rules so dont know if I can up or howmany times... but uh..yeah, UPPIN 1

uppin 2... CAN I GET SOME VOTES?