a quik wun nigga
 

call me searge
cuz im da big boss who in charge
im takin out niggas n not discrimatin against size
a nigga is a nigga..small or large
niggas is still hatin me
cuz im gettin at'em wit flows dats so grimey
already turned down 3 labels dat was tryna sign me
but i stay stackin cash n takin trips to remote places
up in fiji wit bitches dat got beautiful bodies n faces
im tha captain of tha team...i was named ta all universe
last nigga i slammed on was seen in a casket ridin in a hearse
quit poppin off at me nigga cuz its rude
plus if u dont, ill leave u like a swisha house beat...
chopp'd n screw'd






thas anotha 5 minutes verse i got i guess...gimme some feedback niggas

ne1 wanna gimme some feedback on wutchu think bout it???

u started out not rhymin and then u did but when u did it was too stretched out i'm not sayin u suck i'm sure u can be good but just make sure u improve on ur upcoming ones