killing 2 hoes with 1 stone-Cali diss
 

yeah I seen how he challenged me to a battle but then never dropped a track in then tried to say the reason for this was because hes busy well this is for the people that didnt hear the track maybe this will make cali make a track back at me
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/lethalgkmusic.htm

and yo I aint make this thread to beef I made this thread to show cali that I aint make that track for no damn reason I just wanna hear what you come back with in a track

that beat is sick..............and i cud hear all ur disses even wid ur fast flow...how old are you?................diss was dope............i listened to diss aand i wanted it 2 go on............all i can say is less stuff goin on behind the drop like the fuck A.i's etc but it didnt damage drop....all i can say is its a gd thing he didnt drop cos he would had 2 drop fire

"im Gk the best.....???on ur neck
would have come harder but this bitch aint a threat"
^^sounded good

oh word and the bit where u go at him in spanish - was tight...wat did u say?lol

oh and can u hit up ma freestyle wid sum feed im tryin out Audio so gimme sum Constructive Criticism man. Peace :thumbup:

aight thanks yall but cali were you at man, I want to see how you get back at me, thats how you become better dissing somebody and getting dissed back plus I like when someone throws a good punchline at me and it makes me sit there like ohh shit he got me lol, so come on cali we aint even gotta be seriously beefin anymore make your shit into a joke or something then, since you said you all nice and shit on the mic

Lmao @ culdnt stop my runs if u spit pepto bismal ......cali wus smashed on this track....u sound youn how old r u?....lol u like a tolit seat whos gonna piss on u next....i didnt really hear anything on diabolic i like the spanish part overall gud track

check out my track Bitch, Fuck that

Man, i used to think you was just some herb ass kid..

But i actually liked this..

Beat was pretty good..
Quality was alright..

Flow seemed to be good..
Mic presence was pretty good..
Breath control was alright..

Punches were pretty tight..

Overall, just an overall pretty nice diss track..

Good job.

Please hit up the "Troublesome - Will I Ever Get To Heaven" thread.
Thanx.

ah'ight playa I'm always strait up wit my feed an I won't be no different here........ya had a tight beat...ya flow was decent but lacked change ups...you flowed da same threw whole track..made it a lil boring...ya lyrics coulda been way stronger like majority the punches I heard was played an weak....I heard toilet, piss, toilet seat, toilet lid<----dat shit has been smashed, burned, murdered, overdone, shit woulda been ill in 95...jus being real playa...I was looking for originality...but maybe u saving ya ill shit for a battle or something I ono but those punches was weak son, ya delivery was cool...nice energy.....ya addlibs was a tad loud jus a tad...u had good dubs tho....overall it was ah'ight nothing impressive......5.5/10...stay up playa....keep dropping....keep elevating...no hate jus realness..........1

aight thanks and im 14 for yall that asked

yo, intro is alright....lol, flow is pretty dope.....quality is decent, kinda sounds fuzzy in your vocals...your hoes on ym dick check the stains on her shirt...lol, delivery is real nice....i think ur backround talking is a little to loud.....disses are pretty nice.....multis are dope too....



nice track homie



peep mine
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169832

Well u still look like a retard.
But ya sound nice. I liked it.

Empy.
"i will responde tonight you shouldnt have done this now you will feel dumb "
Just shut up man.

You aint toppin this. Kid's got talent. U dont.
Lethal. Nice shit. -1

damn you were into this shit, sound like you was pissed off... rofl @ check the stains on her shirt... lyrics were on point- flow is on point- lots of punches, impressive show of lyrical ability here, Im cool w/ diabolic- but enjoyed it none the less, solid drop... keep em goin 1.

its dope i liked the energy couldnt hear it but still hella str8 stay up

word you couldnt hear it but it was straight haha coo