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Blackmage 01-03-05 08:20 PM

ahead of my time (the paradox)
 
Sometimes i feel i'm the greatest i'm ahead of my time
and instead of just rhyme i can fly ahead of my lines
fore' imbedded by fine graphite and lead at a time
they'll be led out of time through my mind and sped up to find
they're ahead of the mind that made them
but ahead in my time they haven't been made yet
because i've sped up my mind
then i led all the lines forward and ahead of my time
i'm ahead of my time though so i'm ahead of my lines
so they're propelled ahead of me and we constantly pick up speed
faster and faster and faster don't stop or slow down or crash or
flo off or often flo faster it often causes disaster
cause and effect is relapse or relapse of a time collapse
so perhaps it's my mind perhaps,
but if that's so
all the lines are timed in my mind so where do the timelines go
and since my mind is so explosive where do the timelines blow
and if my mind don't ever stop then where do the timelines go
since every road leads to a thick brick wall and a slick slick fall
then essentially a paradox is an oxymoron
but indispensible to my poetical thought process
so i'm fighting a losing battle but i've not lost yet

Da_Throwdest 02-19-05 12:34 AM

it'z good in sum parts of it but u need 2 betta structure ur flow & don't stretch ur lines
but othawise it was overall pretty decent material

L. Veracity 02-19-05 02:46 PM

generally I'd say "he from da Souf' he don't know shit" but
he's correctamundo buddy :)...you got some kewl multies but ya lines are stretched
certain spots, gotta cut 'em down some...you can say what ya tryina say with less
words, just gotta think about it more...keep it up tho...


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