A poem for you
 

Since you came in my life, the sun has shined brighter.//
Sayin things that make me think, you make me wanna be fighter.//
And you make me wanna care more.//
With you I could be the wealthiest person, and still be pour.//
Always heard, that "one" guy will come.//
But I think he's here, the world together, we could run.//
Talk for hours on end.//
We were friends first, and I'll always for you defend.//
Once asked me to be your girl, it would make you so happy.//
And now here we are, even though this may be kind of sappy.//
But let others think what they want.//
Because what we have they always want.//
You said those four letters once so hard to say.//
But I think I might love you as of this day.//

liked this peice also, but i think it felt short like theres it wasn't finished. but either wa all round good stuff. stay up. peace.
joey

its not finished...my life aint finished...so why should i finish a piece i feel so strongly about one person...our love is just beginning not ending...and it was wrote more for him...to let him know my feelings

aight..fuck this shit..ya'll bogus...uppin for the damn sleepers....fuck it

umm yeah uh. nice.....yep uh huh

yo dis PAPISWIFEY i just caint log on unda my name. i was feelin dis piece a lot (probly b/c i know exactly how ya feel) and it did seem like it wasnt finished but i undastand wut u said bout it not bein finished cuz ya love aint ended and yo life iznt ova. but overall i was feelin it. respect.

one

aye aye aye, i liked your other one you posted better, but this one had a nice poetic-ness to it. nawmean? you're doin your thang n maken it all tha while. keep em comen and i'll keep readin. holla.

Hm...
 

Well this was a cute lil poem..Awww....*just finds out there might be drama*...oh no. THE DRAMA MUST STOP!!! It's like a highly contagious disease..wtf. Take Care of your business. Holla.

I liked this piece

deep stuff

iz it really 4 me?!?!? lol

keep it up

HOLLA

DAMNNNNNNNNN, i wasnt trying to sweat beef or talk down on your peice. i was just givin ya my honest opnion. i didnt know ya kept your peice unfinished to symbolize your life, sorry i dont know what your thinking when i read your poems. but my bad is my bad. sorry ya took it so personally.
joey

nah....just wanted to explain myself..it wasn't like i tripped out or ne thing...much luv..God bless..1.

Aww how sweet! You wrote a poem just for me! I feel so special! In fact, I feel SO special that if this poem wasn't for me, I'd be so upset I'd launch that nuclear bomb I stole from Russia and blow up the other end of the continet.

Uh... I think I'll leave it at that. For comical purposes of course.

hahah ya a dork thats all i gotta say...haha..much luv..God bless..1..

awwww thanks 4 writen me a poem ma nice drop

nice strong piece...simple yet well put....enough said..respect.