this should have been in tha song
 

:thumbup: ***this just a keystyle for yall, i was thinkin bout dat "soilder" (destiny child) beat and lil wayne part and i put dis together. like it or love it, i dont care***

see Supaman is a killa, got hoes all on my pillar//
you know dats 4realla//
thinkin i aint gone hit cha when im a soilder at heart//
but bein a soilder and a spitta be havin da $ torn apart//
now i cant be able to increase my status or make these beats//
if another man go and speak when i aint present in tha streets//
peep, but i keep goin and im movin, da kid aint losin//
stick to yo fuckin day job nigga, im nice and you just stupid//
and im tha truest, well probably not but yall will soon see//
dats its gone take more than some fag jokes to knock down me//
im goin too fast, nigga catchin jet lags//
im on fire but not like lloyd banks, im too cool to fumble after a nice pass//
im off tha fuckin ricktar, read da first line, im a killer//
shootin at niggas, leavin them burnt like blunt wraps nigga//
and dats da deal, you know it, dont cope a attitude//
i got tha title wit me at all times, and you just a plain dude//
dats rude...//

***i want some feedback, please***

cmon yall...whats really da deal?

yo that was ass son go do some home work go back to school get of this site mayne

Was nothing special, work on complexing your pieces, other than that i'd give it a 5/10.

:thefinger
nigga fuck you...shit, im just bored and im sick of rippin wit my niggaz...so i wrote dis up...get off my dick bitch

and good lookin mage

and im lookin for mo feedbacks...get at me

5/10 gret mind frame.........i like different

good lookin yall. ~1~

um.....i dont know what 2 say kid
you wanted me to see this shit for what.....i was wack.....let me teach you how to rap

but 4real cuz, you gotta step up a notch.....dats tha only way you'll make it on my mixtape.....come harder next time.....4/10

kid....u only got 5 posts u act as if u know not that i don't agree wit' ya but....still

u dont even know...
 

^^^ha ha...nigga, you cant teach me shit but ay, im gone try some new shit soon....let me write up somethin....maybe we can drop some "family duo" shit OK

no biggie, but i dont think they gonna swear on destiny's child homie, lol, for real

thanx....cmon RV, i want summore feedz