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Damani-DaGrinch 07-15-02 05:11 AM

that concience!!!!!
 
the following hottness that you are about to experience was based on true events..lol

this piece aint all the way done yet but its a workin process right now so bear with me

This shit was originally made fo audio but im stuck wit a bullshit computer so just check it...

black text=Damani-DaGrinch
blue text=my concience


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All of us have our better half//thats me the concience //when we high and drunk cuz//we think thats nonsence //so i cut the voice out//hey what are you doing //cuz i gotta get my money now// screw it lets do it


I never thought this shit could ever happen in my life// high speed chase wit the wheel in my left and the blunt in my right// but ill start this tale off from the very begining// how it went from a normal day to crashing a car up in eppely// I started off skipping school gettin bent off the henney// tryin to get head from lori, precious or that bitch jenney// but it all took a turn for te worst when the homey came through//
talkin bout a convertible on 63rd and maple// we only 3 blocks away and the time is tickin// if we hurry the fuck up than we can than we can make this car missin// Well how you plan to do it?// they left the keys in the ignition// but right then is when my motha fuckin concience came in// talkin boutdont get yourself into this sticky situation// your lifes already fucked up dont make it worse// locked up for ten to life wishin for death and a hearse// just imagine your mother gettin that call on her cell// your son is in jail// damn son dont you think shell be hurt // thats when I cut the voice out and fuckin ignored it// the alcahol has my decision making distorted// well if you aint listening than take this shit as a warning

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Well why we wastin time lets go right now// thats when kevin cracked a smile and said i knew youd be down// now me and kevin on the creep// runnin down the block tryin to be indescrete// jumped in the car skirted out and smashed down the street// now we rollin deep stuntin in a new car// drunk and sommore cronned// not knowin where the fuck we are// after that we tried to hit the weed spot// but they was paranoid thinking white ass kevin was a cop// now its about eleven o'clock// was rollin da strip but took a right on dodge// and caught the sights of an undercover cop// he pulled on my left and threw the blue light on top// that just made me go faster than old dirty bastard after he stabbed her// than i heard a voice yell out WHAT A DISASTER!!!!// i tried to warn you about this but my opinion didnt matter//just pull over and turn yourself in before it gets worse// before the motha fuckin pigs' bullets disperse// i can see it in the newspaper tommorrow mornig// car thief saw the cop and he started stormin// within a matter of minutes the officers were swarmin// shots were fired through his windshield because he failed to yield// luitenant Davis stated that he had a weapon concieled// two bullets missed and one went through his head// the car spun and crashed, the passengers were instantly dead// do you really want that for you and your friends?// Whats it gonna take just to fuckin shut you up// imma hit this blunt and run// cuz its my life and i aint getin caught...

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to be continued........

LACK OF LOGIC 07-15-02 05:12 AM

THATS ILNESS NO DOUBT CONCEPT THE WAY YOU SPIT IT ON HERE EVEN THE TIMING TO CROSS THOUGHTS TIGHT

Acidic 07-15-02 05:17 AM

it was nice cant wait till its finished its just like a movie almost

Damani-DaGrinch 07-15-02 06:24 AM

thanx for the props...

im uppin the shit out of this i wanna know what yall niggaz think

LACK OF LOGIC 07-15-02 06:25 AM

yo my verse done where do i send it

Damani-DaGrinch 07-15-02 06:28 AM

i guess just email me with that shit
damanidagrinch@hotmail.com

LACK OF LOGIC 07-15-02 06:33 AM

I SENT IT YOU SHOULD HAVE IT BY NOW

kmfrob 07-15-02 06:36 AM

well thats what happens when you miss school lol nah serious tho this was tight id like to hear it in audio if ya can get a decent enough mic. i like story tellin hip hop but anyway check mine bent politicians (short but sweet) aight peace cuz

Johnny 6-feet 07-15-02 06:38 AM

originality!!!! well, this has shades of eminem and dre's guilty conscience, but very nicely delivered, mostly good vocab and great use of conversational rap.

keep posting.

Damani-DaGrinch 07-15-02 06:50 AM

straight straight thanx for the props from my british catz.....

Damani-DaGrinch 05-29-03 07:09 PM

i aint been on dis board in a hot minute
so ima up sum really old shit 2 give yall an idea of what im workin wit
holla


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