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True Story Bases
aight he made me post it so people'll pay attention but this his song..and bascially his story..Ill games and I'm playin his friend named Ty..he told me what happened so I made my vision on what was going through his mind aint I dope :D..I rapped it as he told me [/bragging] ..but this all true...crit this or I'll bite you really hard Ill Game=Bold Me=Italic ________________________________________________ its like being hit by the sun..catching a hollow tip from a gun i missed melvin cuz i had nowhere to run so i just stood there stunned and turned around and dropped asking myself the question "did i just get popped" hell nah this cops not gonna pull that off but im leaking from my shoulder, shit fuck that pig wheres melvin now im starting to hate that kid i thought he said hed be there for me no mater what i did but in any case shit is starting to go black next thing i know i wake up in the hospital sack ________________________________________________ Its like being asleep in a fire while choking.. picture me on the other side as fire was opened.. no thought of compation..just action taken upon.. I wonder how Tyler felt while facin a gun..bum bum my heart raced..and my blood ran laps..in this case.. I wasn't there I hope he understands that.. I had to stand back..damn cops put a bullet in his damn back if he died there with them..he couldn't get his revenge his spite for his life..he would surely take them with him they must imagin everyone's a crook over ten to them.. those images playback..through my mind..and rewind they deifeid his rights..which got me in a slump..denied delight I knew it..I thoughts and plots and suspensions were fuelin its true the boy human..and soon his fluid will demise but mute the laughter bitches,the nigga still alive ________________________________________________ p-p-peace drop link with-in 24 hours to where u gave feed back on or this will be closed....... im just doing my job...... we gotta get open mic more active so it can stay alive.... |
Damn dats hot..........yall collab together is geuise...............keep droppin hot shit......
yo will u return tha favor on my open mic an my battle thanx. |
im ill game jus so yall know and quit sleepng on this shit
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damn i supose that first verse was that cat that started it...cuz i see the styles different...but shit nice job
good use of creativty....and i heard this happend but shit nicly done with the vocab and multis...a few....very creative and nicly done with the stucture and flow...im starting to see this cat rise more...wordnizzle.. return the feed links i the sig... |
thanks yall up....................................
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this rap aint no fucking bed quit sleeping on it
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up..........................
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please leave feed
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Yo this is ty ! mad props to indephh for showin it from my point of view shits insane! keep it up ! Damn homie u do a good as job plain me ever considered bein an actor?
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damn that was hard, nice shit, precise flow and the word selection seemed good, yalls style complemented eachother well, was deep, good piece, have little negative criticism 9/10 would appreciate returned feed back :) on my threads in my sig :) but nice drop, props
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up cmon people.
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it was shit...............fuck you faggot get a life or die
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drop link with-in 24 hours to where u gave feed back on or this will be closed.......
im just doing my job...... we gotta get open mic more active so it can stay alive.... |
very good spit I like your flow....
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