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Love HAtes Me...
Love, where can I go? Without ya Warm Touch
and shelter Im left out in the Cold.. Love,what should I do? How can I go on live without the love of you... Love,I feel so so betrayed! I was told once I discover you I discover peace but all I feel is Pain! Love,this torture is too much I cannot bear The cliff of insanity I am approaching with the mere thought of you not being there! Love,your a hoax not even close to what i thought you would be All my life I've been hoping and searching 4 you now that I found you ..You dont want me.... Why dont you want me? |
good drop...had good emotion in it...sometimes i feel like that 2 but eventually u'll find somebody and you'll know its right...i like the 3rd part in this. i like how it flowed together. it all flowed good but i really like that 3rd part. pc
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actually i married man i just wrote this piece because i know its a individaul out there that feels this way or has felt this way and im just reachin out to those people i have felt this weay before inthe past though
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i think we have all felt that way at one point or another
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thanx for the feed back man ...........................................
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thanx for the feed back man ...........................................
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nice drop man.....married..how old are ya......but back ot the poem.....this was nice.....i like the approach and scheme you used in this......flow was good.....it had great emotion.....keep it up man......rtf....links in sig
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im 21 thanx for the feed back...............!
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