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Kstroyer 07-15-02 10:04 AM

A letter to More than a Friend
 
If heaven gave my heart one wish it would be to take you away from all your sorrows/
to put all your aches and pains on my back/
when you fell, babygirl, i'd take the impact/
But I know I havent been treating you this way/
its like i forget how to act im sorry what more can i say/
Forget the past hurts and disappointments change the way your thinking/
as long as your mad my heart is steady sinking/
I told myself i wouldnt treat you like the others/
I didnt want to be a reason for your issues/
for me to be close like a brother/
when you cry id be that shoulder to lean on id be your tissues/
Friends are suppose to be true, i messed up, because first i liked you/
but I checked the inside, rearranged it, im rdy to start something new/
Friends? plz you gotta say yes/
To a friend from a friend i just had to get this off my chest/

ps

id rather risk the chance of there ever being an US then to lose our friendship.

Kstroyer 07-15-02 02:53 PM

uppin

Calisto 07-15-02 03:02 PM

not bad. i got much respect fa u on dis one. i undastand where ya comin from. keep it up.

one

Calisto 07-15-02 03:04 PM

by tha way...dat was from PAPISWIFEY....RB wont let me get on my own name again. one

Kstroyer 07-15-02 03:06 PM

thx yo

Kstroyer 07-16-02 02:25 PM

upin

synickle 07-16-02 03:20 PM

yo doggy i told u imma always hold you down. dis wass positive. "when you fell, babygirl, i'd take the impact". dats my favorite line....... well its wrap. uno

Kstroyer 07-16-02 04:01 PM

thx yo

Truthful State 07-16-02 10:44 PM

that waz coo

DaGyrlRemarqabL 07-16-02 11:40 PM

ay, K...
I was really feelin this piece a lot..you cant go wrong when you put emotions like those in with a flow like that..i was feelin everything you were sayin..nice, powerful ending..nice, powerful verse..much propz...ill keep an eye our for more of ya writez..peace.

Kstroyer 07-17-02 02:53 PM

uppin

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-19-02 10:12 AM

Awww, dis was tight ...
diggin it ...
Hope she returned ur love,

Head up,

Pz
~1~


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