Sraight Of The Dome......
 

Ok i'mma just keystyle sumthing up really quick.....





Whats the bases i'm mixed up like trading spaces
PHAT like Ol Schoo laces,Ya'lls shit is bitten copied and pasted
Truth is i'm the next to lead,to suceed,fufilling my dreams
But some cant face it,so close to gettin signed i can taste it
Clean you fast like a windshield wiper,dispose you like u's a diper
No real cyhpers,typers,writers,95 percent of ya'll is biter's
i'm asking wheres the chicks,they all avg. like my temputure 98.6
Do it for family,even tho thay cant be standing me,
They cant stand-2-see,this phar-a-cy,nice shoes,wanna pair-of-theez



Keyed up really quick gotta go to bed soon so all i did was like 9 lines.....

24 hours to drop a link or this will be CLOSED.......
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

smooth flow
old school hip hop style

:thumbup:

yea no doubt.....uppin for some more feed.....

dat wuz wet keep drop da ol skool shit

yea no doubt thats hot right there.....lol you all know it....uppin

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

I liked the old school feel and flow, and its your style, which is dope and adds flavor, but heh, again, not my type of writing but suggestionis elevation of vocab a bit, but good flow and decent structure keep it up

^^^ good honest feed like that......uppin still lol....i'm ol school what can i say.....

lmao iight i'm uppin...

i loved that it was kickin like forgotten says keep it up and good things well happen

thank u all for tha feef uppin....

Uppin. . . . . . . .............................

To use force is habit but like coarse fabric my patience
Wears thin who dare win in battle? Victory has fragrance
Scripts expand like strips of land unplowed make a farmer
Get a tractor become stormier than a nuclear reactor I’m a charmer
Like Dentzel sprint well like Flo Jo but murders like Jeffrey Dahmer
Lyrics all goes wild like a bald prose style no hair on this
Affairs brisk like tea dancing in rains like Fredestair with a kiss