I'm Cursed............
 

i dropped this on two other sites,now i'm droppin here. :thumbup:

How can I ignore this rain,My hearts pourin' pain
Soul's gone insane,desperate cries gone all in vain
Conscience locked away,immobilized by hates ball n chain
I hate to go against em so i'm dodgin' all the grains
In hopes of piecin' t'gether my shattered dreams
Abruptly corrupted at birth by genes,sorry that this is how it had to be
I came to terms with this tragedy gradually,I actually
Asked God to save me he sees it fit to wait gettin back to me
Why can't I return this evil streak to the factory
Emotions got me feeble,weak n breathin' unhappily
Live in this relm of hell n the streets keep on strappin me
I see no glimps of light in this tunnel,the futures the darkest shade of black to me
I'm like Chucky dying to live in the flesh free of the battery
Assault n robbery,rapidly wishin' cupid would clap at me
Lift this devilish spell so I can joyfully experience Evil backwards......see(down there)

EVIL..................backwards=.................. LIVE

again another cool drop..................an great wordplay....................keep droppin dat hot shit bra...................

hey dis was a decent piece...lol wat am i talkin bout? dis was HOTT piece...hell yea WELCOME BACK tho 4real.......good wordplay, vocab, multis, punches, ect....yup n my man does it again..keep droppin those sick verses....9/10

thx Lil C and tha unknown for the feedback.i tried to up my shit since the last time i was here.more feedback plz.

Deep. Man. I just left feed. Its geting slept on but this was a great drop. I liked the first line. Something like I would write. Good drop and RTF. Be sure to do that.
Here is my rating for it. 9/10
lol^^
But yeah peace.

Close It...............................

nice verse i like it a lot deep shit

thanks black queen.