Blackmage vs Tyler
 

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10-20 Lines
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No Recycling
No Biting
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-10-05 at 06:38 PM

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Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:33 AM.

You could die tomorrow dog really no one would care
bring ya whole crew with you this still wouldn't be fair
Listen dog nobody cares how you feel i grip steel
not a gun it's a mic, you can't beat me you can try if you like
and try as you might, you will never succeed
ever in your life poser you could never be me
you'd have to light weave on fire just to get a hot track
the only way you'd get an applause is if you make it clap
stick to foldin shit in paper it's your only good rap
stop bitin my nuts, start suckin you seem to be good at that
all these niggas yell bring it, I brung it niggas say do it
I done it and now i run it and these niggas don't want it
this is the "lifestyles of the bitch and the lamest" you dipstick
how you callin me a bitch and you wearing some lipstick
U.K?, naw son U. Gay and a grave's where U'll lay
if U. play and we can crush the U.K anyday anyway
bringin that shit over here actin like you that tough
i'll lay all you people down everytime you act up, i'm blackmage
i spit magic i have it to wreak havoc i keep on it
now put this ill flo under your pillow and sleep on it

Tyler has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 08:09 AM.

You wanna problem homie,then you might as well grab ya biggest ratchets

I see ya kiddish habbits / And im surely happen to watch this midget vanish

Put one in ya chest plate / while I scream out " CHECKMATE"

You probably was one of the victim's dat was spotted on micheal jackson's sex tape

BLACKMAGE? U NOTHING LIKE A FETUS IN A BOX

I LEAVE YOU SCREAMING AN BLEEDING LIKE JESUS BEATEN TO THA CROSS

DAWG? IF I WANTED TO INSULT AND ABUSE YOU,

ID ANSWER BACK UR BATTLE RAP AND NOT EVEN INCLUDE YOU!!

U THINK U A SUPERSTAR BUT AINT GON SIGN SHIT

I MAKE UR PRESENCE FADE QUICKER THAN UR RHYMES DID!!

IF COMPANIES WANTED AN ASSHOLE U THE NUMBER ONE SUSPECT!!

ACTING GANGSTER WHEN U AINT EVEN A THUG YET!!!!

these flash rhymes? you dont "deserve it", u pussy u aint "worth it"

in fact fuck ya verse!!!.................weve probably already "heard it"

your "raps" sound "flat" like your "flows deflated"

if i sed u was "wack" your still "over-rated" (lol)

youll be asleep in a "casket" after this verbal "harrassment"

for me, battling yo faggot ass is simply an "embarrasment"

I guess Blackmage is now holdin a grudge,since now he rollin with thugs

Had to spit shyt out of my profile,so people could be postin him love...........(bless him)

yall vote please? no point in battlin if there are no votes

this is garbage
 

this a wasted battle since ain't nobody voting huh?

Voted For: Tyler

pretty good battle

winner-blackmage
flow-tie
punches-tyler
multies-blackmage

he won just by a little bit, good verse tyler

Voted For: Tyler

Shit homie this was an E-Z win daaam
Okay 1st ur punches were 50 times better than blackmages
2nd- ur multis were off the hook (he didnt even have any)
3rd- Ur metas just blastin
4th- ur flow daam, his flow was like u said "deflated"
5th- Ur personals just killed him and made him nervous
6th- Ur structure was great, it was very easy to read
Blackmage i couldnt understand ur shit srry

after all the shit this balckmadge was talkin...herre i am 2-0 up against you.....lol.....just proves dont act cocky bro. u aint good enough to be cocky aiight!! oh and fuck you aswell........bitch

Voted For: Blackmage

blackmage:
You could die tomorrow dog really no one would care
bring ya whole crew with you this still wouldn't be fair
Simple opener, punch wasn't very hard
Listen dog nobody cares how you feel i grip steel
not a gun it's a mic, you can't beat me you can try if you like
Decent multis, but again punch wasn't there
and try as you might, you will never succeed
ever in your life poser you could never be me
Blah...
you'd have to light weave on fire just to get a hot track
the only way you'd get an applause is if you make it clap
Setup was good, 2nd was decent, punch was aight
stick to foldin shit in paper it's your only good rap
stop bitin my nuts, start suckin you seem to be good at that
Good setup, punch was aight
all these niggas yell bring it, I brung it niggas say do it
I done it and now i run it and these niggas don't want it
Self-glorification in second line, brings the bar down
this is the "lifestyles of the bitch and the lamest" you dipstick
how you callin me a bitch and you wearing some lipstick
Ehh...fake personal
U.K?, naw son U. Gay and a grave's where U'll lay
if U. play and we can crush the U.K anyday anyway
Decent personal play here, but no punch
bringin that shit over here actin like you that tough
i'll lay all you people down everytime you act up, i'm blackmage
Weak
i spit magic i have it to wreak havoc i keep on it
now put this ill flo under your pillow and sleep on it
Weak closer, meta had potential, but self-glory ruinend it

Tyler:
You wanna problem homie,then you might as well grab ya biggest ratchets
I see ya kiddish habbits / And im surely happen to watch this midget vanish
Decent multis, punch was lacking, aight opener overall
Put one in ya chest plate / while I scream out " CHECKMATE"
You probably was one of the victim's dat was spotted on micheal jackson's sex tape
Michael Jackson lines are played
BLACKMAGE? U NOTHING LIKE A FETUS IN A BOX
I LEAVE YOU SCREAMING AN BLEEDING LIKE JESUS BEATEN TO THA CROSS
Weak
DAWG? IF I WANTED TO INSULT AND ABUSE YOU,
ID ANSWER BACK UR BATTLE RAP AND NOT EVEN INCLUDE YOU!!
This was garbage
U THINK U A SUPERSTAR BUT AINT GON SIGN SHIT
I MAKE UR PRESENCE FADE QUICKER THAN UR RHYMES DID!!
I didn't know his presence or his rhymes vanished
IF COMPANIES WANTED AN ASSHOLE U THE NUMBER ONE SUSPECT!!
ACTING GANGSTER WHEN U AINT EVEN A THUG YET!!!!
I rhymed like this in 3rd grade.
these flash rhymes? you dont "deserve it", u pussy u aint "worth it"
in fact fuck ya verse!!!.................weve probably already "heard it"
Weak, multis were lame, punch didn't hit
your "raps" sound "flat" like your "flows deflated"
if i sed u was "wack" your still "over-rated" (lol)
Why is there an "lol" in there? It wasn't funny.
youll be asleep in a "casket" after this verbal "harrassment"
for me, battling yo faggot ass is simply an "embarrasment"
Didn't even rhyme
I guess Blackmage is now holdin a grudge,since now he rollin with thugs
Had to spit shyt out of my profile,so people could be postin him love...
Weak closer, comes off as a fake personal

Honestly, this was a close battle...close in the fact that both of you didn't bring much skill here. But blackmage came slightly harder here, which isn't much to say considering Tyler's verse. Both of you need some elevation, but Tyler needs a lot.

V// Blackmage

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Each, U Sure U Aint Blackmadge? In A Desperate Attempt To Get A Vote?.....hmmmmmm?.......well Never Know.................dick

whatever
 

1. i don't talk shit i was just responding to all your comments
2. i'll admit my verse was weak and i could've came harder but your shit was raw i'll admit that so good shit just calm down on all the trash talkin

vote
 

uppin for votes so this battle can be over with so yall hurry up and vote

Voted For: Tyler

Tyler had better punches and better personals