yvonne vs phive
 

Battle Rules:
10 Lines
house rules
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-08-05 at 06:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 06:55 PM.

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 07:02 PM.

freestyle mayne..


now fuck spittin 10 i'ld still bust ya head with Phive
got ur heart throbin outta fear..at least u feel d jive
i wonder y u aint out seelin crack..herre ya brain'll sparck
ud gain money dan u'd do from rap..'cep u wan' a mack
lil kid trynna spit hard,i'ld say props for the thought
but as it is u a re-tard,ur flows are gein' a deep cut
i think u just a wanksta u'd shit in front of a glock
my lines r eletronic and my wins gonna gi' u a shock
we all know u a pranksta gettin fame from hoppn' on cock
if u get 1 atleast we know u as an elton pal on d block

boy try postin ya verse now....

today...


lets make this thing fast...


1

This bitch wants ta battle a real man thats crazy, maybe cuz she makes money sucking dick cuz shes lazy, i spit bars of heat, my rap styles neat, anyone who follows in yvonnes steps gets athletes feet,

yo imma school this bitch like a fat kid on a bike, this bitch sucks cock, and shes a dyke,

yvonne why would you pick me ta battle, cuz you know ill fuck you harder than a cowboy with out a saddle, this bitch could probably deepthroat an apple, your pussy probably tastes like cum infected snapple,

i cant hit a girl but your the closest ive came, i leave you at 0-1 in this rap game, dont feel shame, cuz im ta blame, youve messed with phive now yo slain,
im tha rap king, i rap you sing, your wearing gold plated im rocking bling bling, ill knock you out in battle and take you in the ring,

whats it like to live with std's, and watch stolen tv's, while ive got money in my pocket and going to tha movies, im gettin fucked by groupies, while your in tha back givin niggas head on two knees,

i could bust you in one bar, leave you an 0-1 scar, you try ta warm things up on me im burning you like hot tar,

my lyrics are magical and at a fast pace, while ive got nice hair youve got cum plastered on ya face,

i rap with a certain humerous style, i can rhyme a mile, we might be the same shit but your in the stinky pile,

you think you can just battle anyone well i guess you can, your not a nigga bitch youve just got a shitty tan,

i run this game like i own you bitch and your bitches, when i fucked you slut you needed 40 stitches, while im warm at home, you roll around in ditches,

shut up bitch you had that shit prolly written phive times in a binder

lets get some votes in here people ill vote for your shit too

Voted For: Yvonne

I vote for Yvonne cuz tha drop was cold she called him out as soon as she stated an didn't let up. Tha Wordplay is tha shit an tha structure is something I could marry its so damn beautiful

yo phive i aint in the mood to net fight or w/e...this is just a damn battle...whatever comes outta ya opponents mouth is to be taken son...so chill...u called me a bitch and i aint mad wichu cos i know im clean..at least ya moma and ya "gurl" aint...


some votes peeps plz...

uppin this shit peeps comon'

you dumb bitch nigga you gettin your dumb ass fuck buddies ta vote for ya this is bull shit i ruined you bitch you bars dont make sense at all

just a quest....are u black?...and for ya info i aint a guy...get a fuckin pair of glasses and look at my sig,avy and name...

i know you aint a guy you fucking moron did i say that you fuck slut no im white

Voted For: Yvonne

First of all, phive should be DQ'ed cause that ain't 10 lines man! But lemme break down your verse anyway...

Your structure was terrible! Fix that to make it more readable! You had some real nice lines in there but most of them were mad played and you kept on bringing yourself up, don't do that...

Lemme give you an example of what you shouldn't use:

im tha rap king, i rap you sing, your wearing gold plated im rocking bling bling, ill knock you out in battle and take you in the ring,
^wack

this bitch could probably deepthroat an apple, your pussy probably tastes like cum infected snapple,
^thats uhm better ya see?

Just try to get those wack lines and self-glorification outta ya system and you'll be fine...

Now Yvonne's verse...your structure,flow n vocab were tight. Had some good punches in there but also a few fillers n self-glorification but i kno you still warmin up so its all good...Get back to it gurl, keep on battling n shit...Was definately feeling your closer, had sum good stuff in there...