Blackmage vs DocC
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-07-05 at 07:39 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

DocC has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 07:59 PM.

even if this kid is a mage, he still couldnt spit fire
herbs like you wont, win, im the reason newcomers retire

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 11:13 PM.

the only thing you running is your mouth, I run it
you and ya whole crew softer then bonecrusher's stomach
plummet into the deep dark depths what we spark's kept
in our pocket bring it out to bring a weak mark's death
I breathe sharks breath but i spit venom like a snake
i'll give you lyrical enemas but you'll still be awake
we supposed to believe you a "chrome poppin vandal"
but nobody buys your shit like the home shopping channel
I was talkin to lady luck she said "he doesn't have a chance"
i bet you'll never show up in my hood like an ambulance
I'll put you in the E.R. cause there's no one weak as you
i'll have jesus looking sayin "look there's nothin we can do"
you goin down quicker than my date on prom night
now you lookin back at me you thinkin i'm the bomb right
i'm not mad at this battler, i actually pity guy
after this battle he'll fall off harder then city high
i ain't tryin to brag but ain't A man as hard as me
you ain't good enough to rap go try your hand at R and B
Blackmage can grip your souls and i'm a send em through hell
you only keystyle cause you wrote so bad your pencil rebelled

lmao it was a punchline battle, you dumbass.......

my bad i had so many battles goin on i guess i wasn't payin attention and just dropped a verse

This was feedback posted for DocC
 

did you forget the rest of your verse? LoL I don't want to vote, because it seems unequal.