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freestyle jus 2 keep tha ladies nipples hard n pussy wet
shawdy can i be ya remedy like jaged edge say
ma i'm itchin wit ambitions 2 make ya bed sway lets say- me n u meet up at 8 at tha holiday inn u n a friend can moan n groan as i'm stickin it in wanna make ya spine tingle ma u no longa single let me tantilize u wit my lingo gurl u tasty like a pringle we on ya roof like Chris Kringle i'm makin ya bells jingle justa battin it like a bingle knockin down roofin n shingles just let ya body speak 4 ya mind n let me in behind like we in a line call me ya chiropractor cuz dis nigga gon straighten ya spine is it tha way u walk tha way u talk tha way u stare at me tha way u smell; or maybe its how ya stroke ya hair at me i'll beat it 1 time it'll b a blowout like USC's match wit Okalhoma i cut deep gurl so deep u'll develop mesotheilioma, have no aroma as u choke down tha boner til i give u ya head of class diploma i'll keep u down there longer leave u blind like u catchin glaucoma nothin heard but screams n rhymes like at a busta show between ya face n ya chin is a few places my nuts'll go aight das how u keep 'em happy n bed wut happens instead if they want real commitment n really wanna play wit ya head be like i'll neva trust a ho but with u i'll risk my lifelines cuz i know u stay true.....name a notha dick like mines |
its aight i liked the rhymes abd the word play 5/10
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nice drop an good wordplay
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thanx 4 tha feed.......damn ya'll dropped feed quick as hell
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heh...really really isn't my kind of writing, but its not bad tho, flow is good and rhymes, im just not feelin the content but otherwise, pretty straight keep it up, I'd like to see some of your more serious stuff, but good drop 6.6/10 , would preciate if you dropped feed on me
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uppin...........
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