Mad Dog vs Killah.Bwoy
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DickRiding
No Hate & Unexplained Votes

Don't miss the deadline...battles are expensive on RV these days lol :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 01-06-05 at 06:49 AM

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Killah.Bwoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 06:19 AM.

Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 06:20 AM.

This Weener Dogs Time has come, but one problem,
Merk Mad Dog with a DMX Mentallity,
Check The Lines "Flammable", Roast This Mutt,
Disgrace To England, And I know It's Fact When,

Claims Hot, But His lines Reak a horrible Gas..
Why? 'Cause all his fire power comes from his ass..
That probably explains the refrigerator full of beans..
He's a Real Killer, At The dinner table,
.........he left his whole family on the murder scene..
Past wins inaccurate, who can refuse that humerous accent..
On a site full of kids 6 years younger hmm can someone say


http://www.1manband.it/images/funny/michael_jackson.jpg

*Another Day Another Merking*

Kid u gonn get circled out more than Naughts & Crosses,
70 wins impressive but people more distracted by ya losses,

Now the bosses of 4 clippz ready to ditch this bitch,
For talkin shit and fallin quicker than collapsed clits,

How can u be a killah? this da 3rd time u bout 2 lose verse me,
Ya 14 wit 2 failed sites rollin wit 4 twits...
........................so sayin ya dopes ya only Kontroverzey,

And talk about illiteracy coz ya crew initials ain't V.B,
But you're prolly in denial at being the main cause of V.D,*

(Outro)
VB's a drink that alcohol got ya thinkin what you can't be,

*(Yawn) 10 lines...beat that*

* = Convo he had wit Nos kept sayin VB & V.D (V-erbal D-ienasty)

This was feedback posted for Killah.Bwoy
 

Killah.Bwoy - Good spit, flow was perfect and the punches were landing hard.

Best Line - That probably explains the refrigerator full of beans..
He's a Real Killer, At The dinner table,
.........he left his whole family on the murder scene..

Worst Line - This Weener Dogs Time has come, but one problem,

..I don't know weather to merk him or eat 'em.
Merk Mad Dog with a DMX Mentallity,

..But I guess By Now he's used to gettin beatings.

Mad Dog - Good spit, also had a good flow goin and good personals/punches.

Best Line - And talk about illiteracy coz ya crew initials ain't V.B,
But you're prolly in denial at being the main cause of V.D,*
(even though im in crew it was good.)

Worst Line - How can u be a killah? this da 3rd time u bout 2 lose verse me,
Ya 14 wit 2 failed sites rollin wit 4 twits...
........................so sayin ya dopes ya only Kontroverzey,

OVERALL - great battle here, both came wit hard flows and good punches. I think Killah won this though. He had the better overall verse and punches that were hitten harder. Mad your shit was good to, it was hard to pick. No hate.

Vote - KB

Good luck wit the real votes boyz.

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This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 

aight this was pretty one sided.... aight... heres my break down....

Killa... not a fan of the structure at all... your flow was all messed up and a lot of that came from a bad structure... punches and personals were aight but u know they could have been better, vocab was not all that wonderful, could have seen more multis... overall ive seen MUCH BETTER from you.... 4/10

M-Dog.... aight you got this no doubt... structure wasnt the best but it was aight, a couple of lines were a little stretched.. flow was ok, punches and personals is what won this for you, they hit hard through out... the personals about his sites and shit were dope... vocab was ok, would have liked more multis but u got this... overall not the best youve done but it was good..... 6.5/10

overall one sided but no hate to either of you.... just wasnt a strong battle in my opinion...... goodluck both of u

Vote maddog

FUCK i hit feedback, i will have strobe change it....

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Voted For: Mad Dog

tight tight!!!

mad surely gets this hands down..his verse was flowing more and his punches hit harder...he had more vocab and structure was pretty decent..killah u had some gd stuff but didnt manipulate it the right way...ya verse was entertainin but didnt flow at all...and as for the rhymes only the first 2 lines had that....well mad gets my vote for comin up with a better flowin verse and better structured verse...ya was dope..keep it up..

vote honestly on mine too...thanx

1 bruhz

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Voted For: Mad Dog

Aiight look, I think that mad dog took this battle because killah, I dunno what that first bit was about, but I couldnt catch onto your rhyme scheme at all.. I didnt really get it, it wasnt even really bad slant rhyming.. Iunno.. Disses were ok, michael jackson punches are so played I'm sick of seeing and hearing them.. Picture references are good, I used to do them a lot when I text battled, but there were better ways you could of done that..

Mad dog, your shit was pretty good. I dont like how you split your bars, I much prefer things running smoothly from bar to bar, but appart from that, the punches definatly matched up with killahs and it was all pretty good.. Good use of personals too..

Mad dog gets my vote on this occaision. Wasnt a bad battle. Peace.

Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes