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The Militant 01-06-05 08:35 AM

hook&1verse to a song i wrote...
 
3x(hook)spirt ya gota hear it poetic words profetic verbs its perfect i know ya heard it(hook)3x
the way god talks to me is thourgh my hip-hop scriptures
he uses my pad and pencil to paint his pictures/
suddenly no fear my minds clear no more tear a calmin sense
and my life depicts thourgh my rhymin sentence
no longer a menace if i contuine on this path in a few years ill be in venice/
popin tops no more haulin ass from cops a succesful carrer
im surrunded by my boyz it feels im the only one hear/
for me it started ass a game but then it became somthing more
it aint about money bitches our jewlery now its a platform nothing more/
almost on some eminem shit but then again it feels ill alwasy be in his shadow
covered by all his platnium plaques but for me its not about that i contunie to grow and i know/
that no one can do it like me im orignal meeseges never sublminal but it feel like im stuck in this terminal/
cause the streets carubt its hard enough to push thourgh and prove go forward and move only one option succes its not possible to lose/
3x(hook) spirt ya got hear it poetic words profetic verbs perfect i know ya heard it(hook)3x

Dex 01-06-05 09:07 AM

looking good with that bro. We should hook up for a collab some time

The Militant 01-06-05 09:45 AM

uppppppppppppppin people....................

The Militant 01-06-05 10:17 AM

uppin feed back....................

5MICMEDALLION 01-06-05 10:35 AM

Nice drop,,,7.8/10

Best lines,an nice opener

the way god talks to me is thourgh my hip-hop scriptures
he uses my pad and pencil to paint his pictures/

The Militant 01-06-05 12:11 PM

uppppin........

The Militant 01-06-05 12:26 PM

uppppppppin....................................... ...............

$hani¢e 01-06-05 12:40 PM

pretty good.....i'd give it an 8/10 keep uppin though....

The Militant 01-06-05 12:49 PM

uppppppppppppppin...............................

The Militant 01-06-05 01:23 PM

come on people dont sleep.......................

The Militant 01-06-05 03:32 PM

uppin.............................................

The Militant 01-06-05 05:21 PM

uppin//////////////////////////////////////////////

The Militant 01-06-05 10:17 PM

uppppppppppppin......................


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