my newest one so far
 

you might not like my taste
and u think i'm just a waste
but last time i heard u unleash your rage
u got booed off the damn stage
u gots to get off this site
because the rhymes u spittin just not rite
and u wanna stay and fight???
don't make me think about emptyin' my clips
that has enough power to sink three big ships
and now that i got u at gunpoint u want an autograph??
bitch don't even make me laugh
me and the L-N-L staff gots so much ammunition
that the FBI's startin' to grow some suspicion
c'mon bite a bullet they're good for your nutrition
boy u better start wishin' that u don't see us around
because we'll leave you tremblin' and shakin' on da ground
and we so high that we snort more than half a pound
i'll cap u faster than Dirrty Harry
so u better not grow to be weary
because i'm a man of my word
so u better be insured
because by the time u get done reading this text
you'll be the one we after next


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lookin fo some feedback

wet drop boy ...................you startin to shine Fam. keep doin yo thing

thanx Unknown c'mon people give me some more feedback i'll give u some if u give me some

uppin on some feedback now start spillin

come on people i need some fuckin feedback or u just gonna sit there

i wouldent say anything great here cuz theres nothing real creative but your lines are ight...the stucture was weak and the flow was ight...vocabulary was weak...not really anythign creative with wordplay so i would probably give this a...umm....
4.3/10 sry man elevate

return the fav...
i have a single called Unsuitable Life...my real name is parallel...dont feed on the collab only the single ight..thanks...pz

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yo i really have to get some more links on here so homies start typin' even if u think i'm wack, u could tell me what i need to improve on cuz da last thing i needz is to have my threadz closed