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~Babylon~ vs Tha Sickness
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-06-05 at 08:30 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Tha Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 02:32 PM.
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~Babylon~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 02:33 PM.
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sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not ~Babz~ |
just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/*
tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/ ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/ electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/ electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/ only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/ *Hanging Gardens of Babylon - check ya history books |
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Voted For: ~Babylon~
Tha Sickness just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/* tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/ ^okay okay, good opener ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/ electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/ ^uhm, nah, doesn't do the trick electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/ only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/ ^weak closer Your first line was real nice but what was up with the rest of them? Just try to get more hardhitting punches and personals in there to bring this cat down. Vocab,structure and flow were aight though but i didn't really find anything bold in your verse. But you got potential,keep on dropping and read other battles...no hate... ~Babylon~ sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness ^decent opener kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath ^haha,liked last line,first one was bleh... its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not ^weak closer You didn't really try at all but you had two nice punches in there. Vocab,structure and flow were straight on too. I've seen better from you and you're lucky the other cat didn't come harder cause you didn't really put any effort in it i think but my vote still goes to you for more hardhitting material... |
Voted For: ~Babylon~
sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness haha...nice kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath haha nice its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not ok finisher breakdown...that was a tyght verse real short i hate that...but nice just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/* tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/ nice ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/ electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/ ok electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/ only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/ ok breakdown...your verse was medicocre....not enuff to edge in this battle...your punches weren't hittin as hard as babs... VOTE-BABYLON |
This was feedback posted for Tha Sickness
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This was feedback posted for ~Babylon~
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nice shit crhymie. you got this. oner. ...the super... |
Voted For: Tha Sickness
winner-tha sickness flow-tie punches-sickness finisher-sickness by a little bit both verses were good can yall vote on my battles plz |
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Voted For: ~Babylon~
umm battle was kind if weak...nothin really stood out from both of you but i gotta go with babs cuzz he had a betta ryhme scheme n wasn't sayin no dumb shit...sickness nobody wanna check a history book da get ya punchline u should explained it...but theres not much 2 explain on dis wun.. RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN DA SIG |
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Voted For: ~Babylon~
sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness nice punch here kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath kinda weak though, but it landed its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not decent closer just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/* tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/ weak punch here ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/ electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/ nah, played concept here kid electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/ only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/ nope…self-glorification here… http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171164 ^RTF For Me Babylon |
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