/\nightmare/\ vs bizzy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

*freestyle battle

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-06-05 at 07:14 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

/\nightmare/\ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 06:45 PM.

Bizzy has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 06:46 PM.

fuck this cat, i might as well be former jared, cuz my shit is phat
end up gettin bitch slapped, just like christmas is over...its a wrap
only way you could elevate is if u were going up in an elevator
while im constantly elevating without steppin like an automatic escalator
your just a hater, so go ,hurry up, and get off of my penis
like fucking einstein, with my mind, im a rhyme-ing genius
hahahahhahahhahaha, is how i leave these posts with my tracks
if you wuz staring at an open history book, you ass still couldnt face the facts
bring ing the hot shit, like a flammable turd in a bag
your fingers only get action from typing, and poking holes in a porno mag
im your dad, or might as well be, cuz im definitly, gonna son you
now he is a tread mill cuz im constantly runnin you
having fun wit you, haha, matter fact, like an insect im slugging you
your flow is rather sticky, while i rhyme sickly, like i caught the flew
im too furious and too fast, so get back, now wut you gon do
if u wuz on nickelodeon your ass still wouldnt have a clue
if u wuz on mtv your ass would stick wit being a foe
only reason that your cold is cuz your reppin southpole
your too old, but have never grown, so get off the internet
playing tekken is the only time youve ever seen or touched a tec
when i step into the place guarantee that im gonna be reppin
my verses are so biblical the way that they are bleesin
yo gurl im caressing...touching her chest and...well you dont want to know
but o well...i stuck my dingaling and my fingers into her booty hole
ima stop, b4 this shit gets to gross, but thats the way that the truth goes
once again dont fuck wit mme cuz im a nightmare
only time i am equal is when im riding ridez at the *fair*
your mind cant be like mine, cuz yours is in a destitute frame
your alwayz bizzy on the internet, just like your gay name
when i say hood, you think im talkin bout the one on your jacket
as soon as you came outta your moms wound, your dad immedaitly said....you shouldntve had it

hahahhahahahahahahahhahahhahahaa

(*Real Emcees should be able to catch the subtle changes in tha FLOW*)
Eyo..
First OFF, fuck you and what's WRITTEN-IN-YA-LINES ~ You already LOST, I don't gotta LISTEN-TO-YA-RHYMES//
VISION-IS-BLIND, only thing you HITTIN-IS-YA-PRIME (old ass.. lol) ~ I'm the type to juss FLIP and go FISHIN-WIT-YA-SPINE!!!//
FUCK-YA-CREW ~ you faggots betta TUCK-YA-JEWELS, or I'ma have to CLUTCH-THE-OOZE & RUSH-YOU-FOOLS//
MUST-BE-CONFUSED ~ if you think you CRUSHIN-THIS-DUDE, Just KNOW-THIS: ya FOE-IS FOCUSED, so TRUST-ME-YOU'LL-LOOSE//
I'm BUSTIN-AT-YOU, so DUCK when I SHOOT~you BETTER-FEAR, cuz you know my plan is "full-PROOF" like EVERCLEAR!!!//
Ya moma will SHED-TEARS when her SON'S-UP-IN-HEAVEN ~ so when you see me, you betta "RUN"-LIKE-THE-"REVERUND!!!"//
BACK-TO-OUR-BOUT, I'ma beat this FAGGOT-NO-DOUBT ~ you only 'talk shit' cuz you like dat "ASS-IN-YA-MOUF!!!"//
TOSSIN-SALADS ~ wanted me to TOSS-SUM-CABAGE, but I'm only into "eatin pussies" ACROSS-THE-ATLAS!!!//
(You) LOST-THIS-MATCH-CUZ ~ bizzy's got a WAY-WIT-SPEECH ~ I 'come HOT' like the 'wet SPOT' on SATAN'S-SHEETS!!!// (LMAO)
Let's MAKE-THIS-"BREIF" ~ since this fag wants to "JOCK"-ME ~ I'd think you was my "shadow" the way you tryin to MOCK-ME//
I'll POP-THREE ~ SHOTS, have you CLUTCHIN-YA-RIBS ~ You're like "R. Kelly" cuz you're "not TOUCHIN-THIS-KID!!!"// (LOL)
Up against me, you're gonna need MORE-THAN-SOLDIERS ~ "Pressin-ya-LUCK," I'll rip-UP ya FOUR-LEAVE-CLOVERS!!!// SORTA-LIKE-VULTURES ~ bizzy plans to FEAST-ON-YA-CARCUS ~ You'll need more than brail just to READ-ALL-MY-BARS-BITCH!!!*//
You gave me a REASON-TO-START-THIS ~ my DARTS-neva-MISS, like I'm standin 2 FEET-FROM-THE-TARGET!!!//
You sure you want BEEF-WIT-THIS-ARTIST?! ~ I'll bring it to "ya city"~You'll FEEL-ME when I LEAVE ya TEETH-ON-THE-PARK-BENCH!!!// ~KO.. itz OVA!!!~
(*kOnQuEsT.. nO cOnTeSt*)

i slept on you but you still not fuckin with me uppppin

uppin............................................. hahahahahhahahhahahhahahahahahhahahahahhahahah

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppp pppppppppppin

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin.... ..

Voted For: Bizzy

winner bizzy

flow-tie
punches-bizzy
multies-bizzy
complexity-bizzy
finisher-tie
opener-bizzy

both were hot verses but bizzy came out on top in this battle in my opinion

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Voted For: Bizzy

V/bizzy....he got my vote because of his creativity in the punchs an his multis were on point...he had a good verse all around....nightmare...u had an unconsistent verse u had sum good lines then u fell off wit sum...
punchs=bizzy
multis=bizzy
vocab=bizzy
structure=bizzy
overall=bizzy
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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thanx upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn............ ..

Voted For: Bizzy

yo bizzy ya shit is tight but u need to fix ya structure good shit tho u ripped the fuck outa him and his 31 lines lol

REmoved

Voted For: /\nightmare/\

Bizzy Ya Shit Wass Ok Not Realli Good
Nightmare Yours Wass Alright To,Not That Good

Openor=Tie
Multiz=Bizzy
Personals=Nightmare
Punches=Tie
Strukture=Nightmare Bizzies Wass Confusin
Metaz=Nightmare
Closer=None They Both Wass Wack

Bizzy Ya Verse Wass Ok To Much Self Glory You Wasn't Realli Dissin Him Ya Strukture Wass Off And Ya Punches Wass Kinda Weak

Nightmare Ya Strukture Wass Koo Easy Ta Read,Good Punches Few Personals Some About His Name Up Ya Vokab Cus................

/V Nightmare....................