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Ragnarok 01-06-05 10:43 PM

FaluKun vs **FLEx**
 
Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Okay If i win i get one win and a loss taken out of my record
If YOU win you get 2 wins and i get a loss
Post in "Agree"

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-06-05 at 11:13 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 01-06-05 10:45 PM

FaluKun has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 10:45 PM.

Ragnarok 01-06-05 10:48 PM

I’ll show this kid who’s boss, and I aint talking about material.
Cause I’ll be giving him the real Special K Out from the cereal.
Fuck a Flex,……. I’m already soaring higher that you can see.
I can just change one letter in your name, and watch you FLEE.
I’ll put his text shit in a watery spin, round and round like a top.
Cause even if I’m in low elevation I’ll still be topping the battle off.


Special K is a cereal
Miami’s land elevation is lower that Canandas

System 01-06-05 11:05 PM

**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 11:05 PM.

**FLEx** 01-06-05 11:13 PM

yo,

Your a plagarist racist who's faces is encased with snakes that leave traces of bullet wounds in your braces//
Your damn right your a bird, Faulken, your absured as a thef u can't rob, you got ayellow belly and more holes in you than spongebob//
I snap picks of your moms thong, which by the way has more hair on it then the back of King Kong//
I live strong, and spit on mikes like they were acid//
I got more blood in my gums then the croc from lake plasid//
Fuckin' faulken your fucked, cus you just got cooked like your brother the Peking Duck!//

6 lines man? pussy

Abraxas 01-08-05 03:48 PM

This was feedback posted for FaluKun
 
ckecking out battle............................................ .

**FLEx** 01-27-05 09:42 PM

uppin............................................. ................

gotaasswhoopin4u 01-27-05 10:01 PM

Voted For: FaluKun

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174004

Falukan
I’ll show this kid who’s boss, and I aint talking about material.
Cause I’ll be giving him the real Special K Out from the cereal.
ass
Fuck a Flex,……. I’m already soaring higher that you can see.
I can just change one letter in your name, and watch you FLEE.
ok
I’ll put his text shit in a watery spin, round and round like a top.
Cause even if I’m in low elevation I’ll still be topping the battle off.
wack


flex
Your a plagarist racist who's faces is encased with snakes that leave traces of bullet wounds in your braces//
Your damn right your a bird, Faulken, your absured as a thef u can't rob, you got ayellow belly and more holes in you than spongebob//
...shit was so off, if you shortened it, it wouldve sounded better, it was iight, but i had to search to see where the fuck the line ended, you rhyme scheme was gay son.
I snap picks of your moms thong, which by the way has more hair on it then the back of King Kong//
I live strong, and spit on mikes like they were acid//
fuck is mike? and if you talkin bout a microphone...blah, save the self glorification for set ups son
I got more blood in my gums then the croc from lake plasid//
Fuckin' faulken your fucked, cus you just got cooked like your brother the Peking Duck!//
gay

battle wasn't good at all, v/fal

can yal got vote on my battle, link above.

~Lady Fiya~ 02-02-05 11:52 PM

Voted For: FaluKun

Fles you had some multis but they weren't good punches...
Your a plagarist racist who's faces is encased with snakes that leave traces of bullet wounds in your braces//
^^that's not a good opener, sorry man... you gotta come harder than that..
your whole verse was full of "I" this and "I" that.. stay dissin your opponent quit glorifying yourself so much, once is cool, but too much ain't hot..

best opener: Falukun
I’ll show this kid who’s boss, and I aint talking about material.
Cause I’ll be giving him the real Special K Out from the cereal.
^^lmao at the Special K-Outta Cereal.. omg nice one


you had the better closer also..
I’ll put his text shit in a watery spin, round and round like a top.
Cause even if I’m in low elevation I’ll still be topping the battle off.
^^however it coulda been worded better... Falukun had better punches, some funny shit here and there.. an aight flow and a decent closer to take the win..
my vote/ Falukun...
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Logic The Goonie 02-03-05 12:11 AM

Voted For: FaluKun

WTF@this battle. Flex ya shit was gay, bad structure, did it even rhyme somewhere? stop using backslashes and shit yo. Falu ya shit was supremely forced. You have the idea of what to do but just cant seem to pull it off yet. Keep elevating. But I vote fr falukon cuz his was just better in almost all aspects.

v-falukun

Sik Wit It 02-05-05 03:47 PM

Voted For: FaluKun

I’ll show this kid who’s boss, and I aint talking about material.
Cause I’ll be giving him the real Special K Out from the cereal.
nice opener, punch landed
Fuck a Flex,……. I’m already soaring higher that you can see.
I can just change one letter in your name, and watch you FLEE.
decent punch line here, punch connected
I’ll put his text shit in a watery spin, round and round like a top.
Cause even if I’m in low elevation I’ll still be topping the battle off.
nice closer, hard hittin punch to it


Your a plagarist racist who's faces is encased with snakes that leave traces of bullet wounds in your braces//
Your damn right your a bird, Faulken, your absured as a thef u can't rob, you got
no, weak punch here
ayellow belly and more holes in you than spongebob//
I snap picks of your moms thong, which by the way has more hair on it then the back of King Kong//
…played punch + weak to it
I live strong, and spit on mikes like they were acid//
I got more blood in my gums then the croc from lake plasid//
Fuckin' faulken your fucked, cus you just got cooked like your brother the Peking Duck!//
weak punch here, you need help

Overall Falukun took this one, came harder in the punches
and had a decent structure + flow to it, but overall FaluKun took
this one………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦

N.Tavarez 02-05-05 03:49 PM

This was feedback posted for **FLEx**
 
oh..thought you was this flex i knew...good verse both

upfront 02-05-05 11:42 PM

Voted For: **FLEx**

wow no hate but flex came s0oo0o0o much harder done deal easy as shit to pick in this one

vote=flex

Ragnarok 02-06-05 12:50 PM

wack vote..
you just voted for him becuz i beat you..
blah take this vote off..
finnish this battle....

Gutter Shad 02-06-05 01:00 PM

Voted For: **FLEx**

Vote=flex
Killed you with the first bar. His structure wasn't all that but I think Flex deserves the win in this one.

Falukun you need to elevate in your vocab but structure was iight.

But overall flex gets my vote.
return the favor and vote on my battle against Life


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