Phantom vs ~Babylon~
 

Battle Rules:
8 to 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 01-07-05 at 04:13 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 01:19 AM.

~Babylon~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 01:20 AM.

Come on B, I mean, I know you're probably a nice guy at heart
But why is it that as soon as you came back C.S. fell apart?
I'm fresh with my shit, so you should prolly shut up and hear me yo
Cuz although ya state is New...I heard all ya punches years ago
Ya chances are slim in the battle, I mean how long has it been?
I aint even talking bout regristrations when i say you May not win
So feel the punches with me, cuz nobody is gunna see you alive
You might have lyrical nirvana but Kurt Cobain committed suicide
See catch my flow dunny, ya weak punches will never float
What kinda guy sets up a battle where HE barely has min. posts to vote?

This was feedback posted for ~Babylon~
 

hmmmmm suprisingly close one here.................

his alias is groovy, socrates reached his peak, pretends to be new see
cuz hes mediocer to vets, but can be the big man around the newbies
and I knew see, hes jelly like, he shakes, and he's soft
boasts cuz he made tourney semi's , but why brag about shit u lost
thinks he'll git famous off the net, so i'll give him some closure
He got raped in the semi finals, to git his ass some exsposer

But those were all fake personals =/

This was feedback posted for ~Babylon~
 

oh wow didnt think you would actaully bring soem heat....uasually when peopel leave then come back....they are wack...but wow you surprised me....i thought he had you but i say you win...

This was feedback posted for ~Babylon~
 

Just checking how babz doing.........Stay up fam...

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This was feedback posted for ~Babylon~
 

Checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk I Think Soc Won This But I Aint Voting In None Of His Shit Nomore Cuz Hes A Fag And Dont Return Honest Votes Back So Checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Voted For: Phantom

Phantom

Come on B, I mean, I know you're probably a nice guy at heart
But why is it that as soon as you came back C.S. fell apart?
^ LOL nice opener good punch to begin things also personal there too

I'm fresh with my shit, so you should prolly shut up and hear me yo
Cuz although ya state is New...I heard all ya punches years ago
Kinda foced the rhyme but the punch none the less aight

Ya chances are slim in the battle, I mean how long has it been?
I aint even talking bout regristrations when i say you May not win
^ Weak rhyme more of a slant rhyme but good wordplay and steady diss

So feel the punches with me, cuz nobody is gunna see you alive
You might have lyrical nirvana but Kurt Cobain committed suicide
^ Good punch nice connection wit 1st and 2nd line

See catch my flow dunny, ya weak punches will never float
What kinda guy sets up a battle where HE barely has min. posts to vote?
^ Nice closer good flow and nice rhyming

Overall
Nice verse Phan good flow struc aight in places and rhyming decent bar 1 place...decent punches good personal and aight wordplay

~babylon~[b]

If you thought phantom was a fag, you havent been lied to
Sad thing bout the battle, this dued knows more about me than I do
[b]^ No real punch not a strong diss no 1st, 2nd line connection coulda been a lot better openers are always important

He must have followed my career since it began on the net
Whats sadder, someone that lives online, or dick rides for respect
^ personal yes punch not a strong one but the diss is there though

his alias is groovy, socrates reached his peak, pretends to be new see
cuz hes mediocer to vets, but can be the big man around the newbies
^ Personal good like they way you put him down

and I knew see, hes jelly like, he shakes, and he's soft
boasts cuz he made tourney semi's , but why brag about shit u lost
^ Nice personal/punch i know all about that lol

thinks he'll git famous off the net, so i'll give him some closure
He got raped in the semi finals, to git his ass some exsposer
^ Good closer but coulda been worded better rhyme good though

Overall
Less punches more personals...but personals were good but not wow ya know...so ima give this to Phantom outta consistancy on his verse.

RTF on my sig vs Killah.Bwoy

I'm doing a new thing i expect an RTF within 3 days...if that ain't happened...kiss my vote goodbye :thumbup:

Voted For: ~Babylon~

nice battle. very close.

phantom: hot verse, ya structure was nice, your punches connectes, ya personals were good. you had some straight vocab, nothing rele to work on. good.

babylon: your personals were perfect, punches were good, you compeletly got it done. closure was a killer. both verses almost flawless. i felt babylon a bit more though, had those punches not got me laughing i would have voted soc. nice battle....


vote: babylon

return the favor.

Voted For: Phantom

hahahahhahahaha....... im sorry but PHantom took this....

Soc. can make me laugh..... period........ and Babylon., im sorry, but fake personals dont cut it.... and ur las two bars were just that since he won

and ur first one got a chuckle from me, but it wasnt that great.....

for ur other lines....... it was blah.... not meta's or hard hittin punches...... dont get me wrong... it was an ok and good verse, but u needed sumthin better to beat Soc

Soc...... u didnt have anythin that great either for complexity or setups, but the punches hit hard to me..... and u can almost cancel out the last 2 bars by Babylon since they werent true at all....