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J.R. Freeze vs MaRVJay1009
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10-20 lines... first da 3 votes=tko No Crew or hate Votes No Recycling No Biting lets get it goin Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 01-07-05 at 03:20 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. J.R. Freeze dq'ed for dropping 21 lines |
J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 01:28 PM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 01:33 PM.
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look......
ur not makin me flop,hatin me? stop!,unless u like takin 3 shots basically cock!..his name "freeze" but always say dat he "hott" u dont move with no bisquits,& no crew is recrutin yo sickness y? ya "lines stretch" more than ppl waitin 4 "super bowl tickets" i'll kill dis fag myself whut i look like askin a friend da spark him jr. trust me i'll make u "leave jerzy" fasta than "kenyon martin" you real trash fam we all saw how ill ya ryhmes could be....... his sig say dis guy is free,shit been there since SHyNE was free i laugh at ya bar's u dont want satic with marv he-draw-heat like "7 days 4 old ppl"...'JR' we everybody "seen-your-week"* u take my shyne?, no ya shits confusin try a new way da ryhme i'll "draw" on u quick so do like "colorin books" & "stay in line"... act tuff i got bullets dat a make sure dis guy gets wet....... gun on my "hip" im like most "medicine" u'll feel da "side-affect" my sickness just dont stop,so i get bitches dat stroke cock's.. im TIGHTER THAN yA LIL SIS even tho she been wit my whole block* ya punhclines are real confusin so its a problem da get it..... dont test j i got "small-patients" like i was a "doctor 4 midgets" so ima cock and aim if i pop his dat should stop dis lame..... he talk about guns but dont "use-arms" like "soccer games"... *aight when i say seen-your i meant by senior cuzz his anme is jr which mean junior i dont know u'll get da punch.. **look in his sig he gota banner dat says TIGHTER THAN YA LITTLE SISTER..so u'll get dat.. |
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u dieiTn like u ~feelin THINNER~,Marv got 4 wins now he feelin ~bigger~/ He's gonna have to rock "CHAMPION" clothes just to feel like ~he's da winner"~/ MarV got some ~nice shit~,i arrive wit ~rhymes quik~/ but he gonna need a ~life quik~cuz ima leave him breathing wit a~device kit~/ ~more or less~u trapped like~house arrest- J.R.leaves u ~outta breath~/ i'll put da "burner" in Marv's "ear" to make him "~hot to deaf~/..... BURRRRRRNNNNIINNNNNGGG....... I bring "titanium to your cranium", thats how I "Steel your *thoughts-dude*"// Taught you to kneel when talked to, an fear to feel, when I *Walk-through*// Remain in ya place kid, I could spit forever and my skills will withstand the test-of-time// Rematch me after *I win*? I'll mark "X's" on ya forehead, so don't let it "cross"-ya-mind// Watch how i toss-this-mime,You beating me is *more of a stretch* then your best *punchline*!!!// Literally I stomp this bitch to bits, you shoulda locked ya lips, better yet put a *cock-in-it*// Disguise the mic as a "dick", so you could feel proper "*rockin-it*// I rip this jerk-apart, like the "*pledge of allegence*", I spit while "*holding-his-heart*"// Look how my raps *sting-you*,they harder then *lead-mortars*// My "*tracks*" stay in *1/4 of ya mind*, I guess I'm running through ya "*head-quarters*"// .:..---~(~(Nothing But Flames)~)~---..:. Lyrically,this hoe can match me, im way *Beyond-his-logic*, You cant *dodge-it*,i'll leave you "*hung-in-a-hearse*" when i "swung-with-a-verse"// You couldn't *back-up-your-words* with your tongue-in-reverse*// I helped MarV "lose his touch", by putting his "*palms in a blender*"// My Psalms make ya surrender, annihilate this dumb when my *storm-descends*// Hope ya believe in "*Reincarnation*" cuz your about to be "*born again*"//.....(ooohh u smmmeelll meeee) |
This was feedback posted for J.R. Freeze
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This was feedback posted for J.R. Freeze
Both were tight but I was feelin freeze a lil more mosly cuz his punches seemed a lil harder.
FREEZE BOMB LINES: Watch how i toss-this-mime,You beating me is *more of a stretch* then your best *punchline*!!!// Literally I stomp this bitch to bits, you shoulda locked ya lips, better yet put a *cock-in-it*// Marv ya lyrics was ight punches ight but it was hard to keep with you flow cuz it is all crunched together so i couldnt stay n beat like I could wit Freeze, Ya good man no Doubt but .. My Votes fo Freeze |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay1009 decent drop from you...punches were pretty decent, some of them were hard hittin tho and a copule of them weren't...ur structure was good & not all stretched out..decent persona's..didnt see no wp's from you but overall u had a decent drop..but those punches couldn't been a little harder tho J.R. Freeze you drop was aight too...work on your structure too...make it like how MaRVJay's is...dont use the // 's either kinda newbie style there, and dont use the * 's either...but ur punches were kinda hard hittin...some of them were blah but overall both of you elevate a little more...& work on ur structure J. R. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
on both ends the structure was lost jr had good punches good wordplay im lovin those multis marv had better punches wordplay was iight structure was just as bad and he actually had 20 lines like wat the battle said the other dudle had like 27 or something |
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