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dope shit
yo im pissed off and at the sametime Im bord
sick of bein ignored wish I had money to aford And im just down because of the way things r going so I keep flowing and im gonna keep things growing Ive got a sick flow thats about to fuckin explode my words are ammo im just gettin settled 2 reload Blow up rip everyone is this room easy and quickly im so sick with my venemous punches that string witty everythings the same always find someone who's lame people say I got no game fuck all of you are all insane Get a nine pointed at your brain get your face blown away Im here to stay fuck around u'll get popped the next day Lethal words that create a decitful curse punish wid verbs im'a make thinks turn so yout bitch ass people did learn jesus christ ive got sick thoughts of killin u at night give you frights and set alight to you when we fight stop kiddin your missin the key your nothing to me your just a desease for real your all just imaginary Admit it you fucks you know im dope yall get smoked don't take much for me to murder ya by chokin ya throat (bitch) U made this tread with no link after i clearly stated u need a link with proper feed back this is ya first warning..... dont let it happen again.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 |
yo sinner i clearly remember me post'in on one of u'r other drops that u need a link with proper feed back.....
this is ya first warning.... |
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it was pretty simple rhyme scheme.........not a great topic.............
it was ok.............. ~Babz~ |
^^^ thats not a proper feed back......
so plez dont continue to drop link to feed-back like this.... read, understand, N try again.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 |
it was ight not one of the best ive seen on the sit but u still had good multis flow was a lil choppy but it worked...u couldve used a little more of andanved vocabulary but it was till preety good....
6.5/10 best line----Blow up rip everyone is this room easy and quickly im so sick with my venemous punches that string witty worst line-----jesus christ ive got sick thoughts of killin u at night give you frights and set alight to you when we fight leave feed back in mine homie good job peace..... |
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