my job
 

i worked behind the counter at the place called mickey dees
i always get in trouble, for spitting spit bubbles, in peeples cheese
i still little kids's toys..and mug little boys but im not micheal jackson
that special white sauce on your burger, came from my finger's action
hahahahahhahaha...i laughed so hard, that my penis got large
i love watching my customers bend over at their car
you all basically know me...i poop, i rap, and i serve at mickey deez
if you really thought i worked there, then you deserve to suck on these

hahahahhahahahahahhaahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahaha h

*i crack my self up....worse than a suicidal mirror...hahahahhahahahhaha*



u have 24 hours to drop a link with proper feed back or this will be closed...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

i wasnt really feelin this it wasnt my style and thats why i wasnt feelin it but from a lyrics stand point rhymes were ight flow was good structre was good multis werent that good but they worked for this kinda of verse
yo dwag r u tryin to rap like eminem on the slim shady lp if so its not workin...no beef...
leave feed back on my open mics...peace...

it was aight ..nuthin 2 special..work on ya structure...work on ya wordplay and ya complexty..take the point u tryin 2 get out..chop it down..2 make it short and simple and deadly.....Nuff Said....