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Freestyle...
YA'LL BOUT TO WITNESS THE FUCKIN POWER OF X-CELL
shit i got my self in a mess the murders know my adress i run down the streets right thourgh the protest for me cause they cant digest my sucess my words give em strees ive gone thourgh a test and came out at my best and i wont lay beef to rest to till one of us reaches death/ i just changed the game my flame well never be put out i proclaim the rap game/ for me and my own ive grown i aint no clone of eminem i just picked up the microphone/ and i exploded on the scene and im on ya t.v screen i get ya hyped up like caffeine im only fifteen and my rhymes is obscene/ they hot u forgot my whack shit ya got admit im dope my albums comein ya gota buy it/ u dont ull get a penalty a fine cause hip-hops mine ever since i sign on the dotted line/ for up in smoke i awoke all the folk put rap in hold of a choke for the whole west coast/ bastard im on some classic n.w.a rhymes yea them good old times with un-thinkable lines from a lyrical mind/ from a lyrical position for cali im a great addition i got ambation im a emcee call me a lyricall technician on the mic im like a magacian i make shit appear out of no where i dont call my flow rhymes i call'em a compostion in addation to DRE,2PAC,GAME,and EAZY,X-CELL the new edition/ look at X-CELL from a diffrent perspective look at my objective get connected to my life and respect it/ cause im killin bars like a superstar/ no one close to my ability drop ya hostility dont doubt my capability cause beatin me in a battle has a small possibilty ill get u depresed like a women with low fertility/ my flows my child i took every great and gave it a restyle/ just ignore my flaws or throw up ya paws see whos hard/ ill smash ya head to the pavement get ya tomb stone and in-grave it im ill and no-one can change it/ i just typed this all out no breaks so if the flows choppy or i spleed something wrong my fault... |
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it was ok, not the best but just ok. ur flow was very off at times, but ur wordplay was dere and also ur metaphors. now ur vocabulary need a lot of work man. ur vocab was very basic. work on dat and elevate
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not bad homey let me drop this here
Sex impressive need an excessive amount “come here girl” Spend time when I incline in bed kiss a girl call her pearl Kisses cause me to crush can’t pause this free rush of a climax Bend my knees and stoop to the juicy coo-chee soup then relax |
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yah like the others it was okay,alot or multis and it was cool,vobac was dope sometimes,but meh,cant be perfect its a freestyle,keep droppin
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it was decent but i think you could of did betta your structure was off your flow was off sometimes pick up on that work on your vocab it helps but overall i give it a 6/10
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