B-force - Elevated
 

i was workin on this t'night


you may call me spastic, i dont calm like antacid
ya asked for it kid, freeze you as molasses
i dont react when my egos been blasted
my brains been chemically reacted to never be flattened
harder, never flaccid, always fresh, never rancid

no longer primean, highly evolved homo sapien
dashing dime bag bowls, bong hitting champion
one hoot, scoopin loot, old school chronic recruit
giving me elation to be crushing you like a crustacean

call it petty, pint sized like confetti
better be ready, made quick like spaghetti
raw sauce, out you get tossed, recognize tha boss
faster 'n' Andretti, beheaded by my machette

you all insinuate i should elevate all that i create
for fucks sakes give me a minute to renovate
chill out, masturbate, while i take all that you say
and reinstate my place at head plate
a heavyweight , eating up eight steaks

up tempo


you're all overated i hate to say it
i wont make a parade of it
sadly, i feel jaded and i resort to raiding
mentally invading, verbally raping
your bones im scrapping, your nerves im chaffing
can't outwait fate, feeling irrate
i've set the bait, yall just took it late
i could'nt wait, move early out of the gate
slippin tactically in a war state
spiral bound books is where i contemplate
squeeze verbs into nectar lemonaide
a hit insane, methaphetamine melting in your brain
have you rambling for loose change
taking pop cans back standing in the rain




feedback plz?.... :huh:

elevated? :shoot:

posts:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1881101
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1873222
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1875613
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1881101

rate this just some feedback....

Elevate sum mo'...you could do much better if u tried.

it didnt have no topic thats what killed it... ,

i try and defet every old piece i write so we'll see
:whacky:


more feedback?

more feedback yo!

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