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.:DeAtH vIsIoN:. vs Mista_Auth3ntiq
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-11-05 at 12:54 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
.:DeAtH vIsIoN:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 12:55 PM.
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ay dawg dis is kilo n dis 4 da crew battle so accept mayne
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a crime boss i accept bein punished; step up when confronted/
mash my foes to a bloody pulp make enemies sick to they stomach/ just messin around wit dat rhyme scheme tryna make somethin of it but here go my verse nigga u a bitch in hot water i'm down 2 slaughter opposers/ like jesus at birth a souljah; stuck on this earth callin jehovah/ LC in dis bitch til its ova guns as my witness i'm bound 2 rip dis/ u can tell from "how ya names spelled" nothin bout you's "authentic"/ i'm hellenic with ancient scriptures of felonious lyrical mashes/ known 2 leave chalk on blocks like a serial killin lryic assasain/ wanted me outta heavy hittaz bitch u got nerve 2 play me/ i'll put you in semi- retirement quicka than that faggot jay-z/ down 2 ride leave u 2 tha side layed out with a snipe riffle/ ya crew gon merk me, HOW? doin drive-bys on unicycles?/ picture that u couldn't kill me even if u was half tha man ya bitch was/ speakin of her when's tha last time she let me get in dem guts?/ watch me n my team take tha figure of a circle beatin niggaz purple/ claimin i wont do shit bich i aint ya average steve urkel/ LC til tha end mothafucka but i really dont need a crew/ matta fact fuck dis i'm done spittin *hands tha mic 2 u*/ |
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MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 12:07 AM.
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dis kilo dawg. i set it up n dis counts 4 tha crew battle. good luck mayne.1
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Even if you was an sharp shooter you still cant see death visions
Lyrica Cataclysm ? Wack ass crew, but you still jack with them (get it?) Even though hammerIn your crew, don’t mean your punches hit hard Man, you fucking with an poet, my punches will leave you emotionally scarred Your punches scared to come out like you have plague in every bar Even though in all battles you use unlimited lines, don’t mean you’ll win this by far Like your avy I’ll cut you in half but you wont be pledge allegiance for ever breathing The way I’m going to do to your skillz is going to be the same way like titanic leave it sinking I’ll make your eyes bleed for reading this hot text, it’s the only way you can see death visions Call me an worm the way I’m eating your deep death flesh. Hmm taste like baked chicken scarred- LOOK IN DICTIONARY IF YOU DONT KNOW |
Lol Yo Uppin For Some Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi.......
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
aight this was an aight battle... both of yall had some good points and some bad points so imma break it down for u right here: Death: ya shit was aight... i didnt like the structure at all.. shit hurt ya flow and all but it was aight... punches and personals were there but could have been a bit better... they were aight but could have hit harder.. the Jay-z line was played... good vocab tho... it was sorta creative i suppose... overall 4/10 Mista... GREAT STRUCTURE.... i was feelin it... i like it centered but thats just me, it helps the flow and gets it all goin.... flow was tight... personals were tight as fuck... punches could of hit harder... vocab was good.... the closer was dope... overall tight verse... 6.5/10 aight this was an aight battle... both of yall did aight but mista got this one... no hate to either of u.... Vote- Mista |
This was feedback posted for .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.
checkin pollz............................................. .........
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aiyo wickedclown aint yall 2 in da same crew or somethin?
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Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.
^^^uppin' for these cats and checkin' the polls... death... you came somewhat nice.......its too bad your names damn near the same as deadly's. he wont like that too much....lmao. hold it down fellas. oner... s.v.....c.s. Vote removed |
^^^my bad......this was meant as feedback. i'll hit the mods up.
s.v.........c.s. |
This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
it's really to hard to tell so i'm just gonna leave feed
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