Each vs *...Loyalty...*
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-09-05 at 10:40 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Each has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 10:41 PM.

Look Loyalty don't toy with me, I threaten ya game/
Although you're destined for the stars...on the ends of your name/
Expectin' to gain, any respect from me? The fuck is this pest?/
Elipsis in front of ya name, I didn't know you could stutter in text/
'Cuz really though, you're not lyricly inclined/
Those drugs must have visions of bein' "dope" appearin' in ya mind/
I've been clearin' up my time to drop a quick spit/
But this dip shit hasn't even checked yet, quit bein' a bitch kid/
Sorry, didn't mean to hurt your feelings with that last bar/
But when you've dropped you kow you've gone down, like gas peddles at NASCAR/
You're over son, and even though I just flow for fun/
It only took me 10 lines to make your record 0-1/

*...Loyalty...* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 11:08 PM.

"Each" im just getting warmed up man lets~go
i'll have you jumped & checked faster than-a chess~pro Damn keep telling me your new, I can tell from your bitching..
Its hard for ‘Each’ to type with two hands when his pussy is itching.. Ima round my Linez Together and spit with Bunched-rhymes
This Kid couldnt Eat Mine even If he Dropped At Lunchtime I bring humor to battles cause I need to lighten up the mood..
Cause the feeling is always sad when the outcome is you alwayz lose.. Are you Jamacian? Ill fuck ya flow in yo' veins so yo' get a Blood-Clot,
Force you to rhyme in Ice, So we all know your not Hot Dis is the Finale, closin this "groupie" more Than stripperz Panties U fake and if my Arm was amputated, losses still couldn't b "handed" to loyalty

"Each" im just getting warmed up man lets~go
i'll have you jumped & checked faster than-a chess~pro
Damn keep telling me your new, I can tell from your bitching..
Its hard for ‘Each’ to type with two hands when his pussy is itching..
Ima round my Linez Together and spit with Bunched-rhymes
This Kid couldnt Eat Mine even If he Dropped At Lunchtime
I bring humor to battles cause I need to lighten up the mood..
Cause the feeling is always sad when the outcome is you alwayz lose..
Are you Jamacian? Ill fuck ya flow in yo' veins so yo' get a Blood-Clot,
Force you to rhyme in Ice, So we all know your not Hot
Dis is the Finale, closin this "groupie" more Than stripperz Panties
U fake and if my Arm was amputated, losses still couldn't b "handed" to loyalty

my bad i messed up on the battle thread, so judge dis instead

Voted For: Each

Both Verses Wass Tired
Openor=Each His Made Sence And Tha Stukture Wass Koo
Strukture=Each,Easier Ta Read
Punches=Tie They Both Had Some Ok Punches
Personals=None Fix That Both You
Wordplay=None Have Some Wordplay
Closer=Each His Wass Ok,And Tha Strukture Wass Koo
Vokab=None

Each Took This Simply BCus He Had Decent Strukture And Ok Punches Up Ya Vokab Have Some Better Personals Go Ta Tha Tutorial I Can Cee That You Need Some Help............

/V Each..................

Vote switched

so u gon vote fo me, or u keepin ur vote, cuz ill switch it man.

Voted For: Each

Aiight look. I think Each took the battle because of a few reasons. For starters his shit was structured better to emphasise the punchlines instead of having them end half way through a line. And secondly I was feelin the punches were better worded and hit harder. But Each can I just say that using the / symbols after each line is played as hell man, dont use them in text.. Loyalty, you got potential man, but you needa fix up your structure and drop the hard hitting creative punches on each line.

Shit was an alright battle though. But I just think Each took the win here. No hate, just my opinion.

uppin dis battle ^^^^^^^^^
fo more votes, lets go people

Uppin' for votes again, quit sleepin' on this battle

This was feedback posted for *...Loyalty...*
 

Switch that shit back. Structure is not a big enough reason to change a vote, and your verse was wack as fuck.

Uppin' this for more votes. I'm ready to get my first win already.