Street~Shorty vs Flamin Barz
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-09-05 at 01:26 PM

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street~shorty has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 12:34 PM.

Flamin Barz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 12:47 PM.

his punches are so fruit it's like they were made with Snapple-
the fear I cause him is the only way his verses shake 'n' rattle-
I'm the most rambunctous heathin relievin u of bodily functions-
i already know you're a d/r - hidin penises inside of your lunches-
when ngaz approach u they stop-cuz i left so much 'red on ya shirt'-
like u was 'jugglin ketchup'...
ya gettin hurt when ya 'fly' around 'my base'-like u was 'buggin a catcher'-
Armor piercin lyrics plunges ya stomach where ya vest contracts-
You "suck" so much - I just cant wait to see your chest collapse-

man u cudnt slipt fire if u was at a bar u anit no superstar
think ur gangsta drivin a metro cart hat got stuck in tar
olny time you smoke is when you on fire your an illigal immagrant to this country but your visa has expired
man wack verses are no required man u sud be retired and ur robot needs to be re-wired
i stumbled across your profile all i could see was your name,
fucking rookie it seems that your unknown to the game,
fucking noob got no record not even 30 post u cant boast
man ur grossed so wack can get a host ur not good and thats at the most

Voted For: Flamin Barz

Street Shorty

man u cudnt slipt fire if u was at a bar u anit no superstar
think ur gangsta drivin a metro cart hat got stuck in tar
too basic and you had no punch here
olny time you smoke is when you on fire your an illigal immagrant to this country but your visa has expired
i see wut ur tryin to say...but this was weak
man wack verses are no required man u sud be retired and ur robot needs to be re-wired
ur tryin to diss him...but where are the punches?...again weak
i stumbled across your profile all i could see was your name,
fucking rookie it seems that your unknown to the game,
this was coo
fucking noob got no record not even 30 post u cant boast
man ur grossed so wack can get a host ur not good and thats at the most
weak ass closer

3/10...Ur verse was weak cuz...no beef or no hate...u need to learn how to throw punches use wordplay and etc...u had like 1 personal in ur verse and that's it...u have to come harder than this...whether he's a noob or not

Flamin Barz

his punches are so fruit it's like they were made with Snapple-
the fear I cause him is the only way his verses shake 'n' rattle-
coo opener
I'm the most rambunctous heathin relievin u of bodily functions-
i already know you're a d/r - hidin penises inside of your lunches-
lol...nice and funny
when ngaz approach u they stop-cuz i left so much 'red on ya shirt'-
like u was 'jugglin ketchup'...
ya gettin hurt when ya 'fly' around 'my base'-like u was 'buggin a catcher'-
i liked the punch...but this was streched like a mutherfucka
Armor piercin lyrics plunges ya stomach where ya vest contracts-
You "suck" so much - I just cant wait to see your chest collapse-
nice closer

6.5/10...U had an aight verse...atleast you had punches and shit in your verse...your flow was kinda off in the middle...but the verse was coo overall

that's 1-0 - uppin for some more votes on this shit

Voted For: Flamin Barz

flamin barz took it
punches- FB
personals-FB
Flow- FB wit ease
vocab- none work on dat
v/FB hands down

Voted For: Flamin Barz

I'm the most rambunctous heathin relievin u of bodily functions-
i already know you're a d/r - hidin penises inside of your lunches-

^^^ nice nice..

yo street shorty u gatta work on ur punches..metaz..personals and structure...but that was good for a start yo..well flamin barz gets this cos his punches hit harder...they were interesstin and very decent...same with structure u had a nice structure too metaz were much more better and vocab was iight on my P.O.V (point of view)...gd work FB...street shorty keep elevatin u'll make it...

Voted For: Flamin Barz

Flamin u got this E-Z dogg
Opener-Flame
Structure-Flame
Punches- Flame
Flow-Flame
Multis-n/a
Metas-Flame
Enjoyment-Flame
And shorty u were way 2 simplistic
and ur shit didnt make sense
u need to elevate dogg

uppin............................................. .

uppin............................................. ....

Voted For: Flamin Barz

vote no doubt flamin barz here...........good shit homie had good punvhes and good over all flow and structure bbest openr seen in ages,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

IP:


his punches are so fruit it's like they were made with Snapple-
the fear I cause him is the only way his verses shake 'n' rattle-
I'm the most rambunctous heathin relievin u of bodily functions-
i already know you're a d/r - hidin penises inside of your lunches
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol good lines best lines aswell here yo street shorty fukin elevate...your wack i rest my case here............... holla bak and return the favour in my below battles ....aiight