project life
 

slum flow <~~~tell me what yall think yo

this shit is dedacated to everyone in the P's//
we all either rob niggas or bubble up keys to eat//
you gotta enter wit ya head up when u enter the slum//
cus if you don't cat's don't hesitate to put ya name on they gun//
when u watch tv u gotta sit on the floor//
to prevent bein a casualty from the outside war//
there's only one way out through school or thru death//
do ya home work or bust ya gun to put props in ya rep//
we all tryin to make change off of this dirt//
it's not rare when cats get popped fa sellin in opposite turf//
and these little girls rapidly havin littles girls//
they little world is paused cus they opened they thighs//
makin it worse fa they moms now they sleepin out side//
why we all gotta get brought up like this//
why good ones get caught in the fire and they life is ended so quick//
and the pigs don't want to give us a break//
always knockin us fa puttin food on our plates like they badge is at steak//
cus studyin fa test wont feed you and ya peeps//
only way the rents paid is when you get paid in the streets//
and ya moms found out she can't get the lease//
the only entertainment you got is ya dreams when you sleep//
and white folks don't want to hire you//
cus you were baggy jeans and timbs and the last 9 to 5 fired you//
but it's all good i got mad love fa the slum//
i wish Beverlry Hills jocks could trade they place wit the slum//
then they'd find out what it's like not havin a dad//
and the only way to eat is when you slingin up crack//
cus balogna slices alone don't fill ya gut//
if you make it out this jungle u make it from luck//
and we all hungry my belly's all in a brunch//
and the 3-year-old kids eat they boogers fa lunch//
if a suicidal white boy could have a day in this life//
he'll get cured real quick and then appreciate life//
cus in the slum niggas stay up shit they neva settle//
it's a hard knock life it opens the doors in the ghetto//

1ne

i need feedback

yo not bad man
 

i felt flow was kinda choppy to me,

sup wit tha feedbak

This was real life street shit, alota thruth raped. I like the changeups only few mc's do that now these days. Keep posten and elevaten skilz

thanx son uppin fa feedback

Yo, not bad, I actuallyread all of it, I guess it was real street life, I use to live in Lauderhill, that was kinda bad, but not as bad as you say...sitting on the floor not to get shot, and I know your not in the place your lyrics described...because I know you wouldn't have a computer, unless you went to the nearest library or somthing, peace

THIS BELONGS IN OPEN MIC THO

yeah dawg im at my sistas crib on a military post kid, madd rich and shit.

and this shit was in open mic and niggas was sleepin on me so put it in hear.

fake ass nigga

wrong forum............

this is for cyphers.

wuz this a accident,or are you just a dumb fuck?
so what if peeps wuz sleepin?
pm them wit a link.
what if everybody decided ta do this?this whole thread would be cluttered.
whoever is the mod need ta move this shit or delete it.