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Hot Shii! Collab Between D.Truth and Ill.Logic
Yeah..ya damn rite...
Ill.Logic-Blue D.Truth-Red Im about to clear ya conscience..ya gon *fade to black* and i'm like Hova i got the people sayin *the truth is back* we come and spit sick...then the fans want more* And we drop "legendary flows" like tupac pissed on the floor* Don't trip offa da structure or da presentation jus look at da flow Cuz god's boy father's hoez and the truth iz iller den Biggie wit da common cold We rip through the om thread and rip up your collaberations* And commense to tear apart your internal organs like the game operation* ...like 3 minutes later...cuz i'm slow wit da bar.... come bow down to the greats..look *clear* thru yo *dome* and reveal ya fates fuck the paper chase...refuse to drop weak tho i may drop late split ya brains in half...so ya thoughts are divided* Cuz ILL and D is ownin the worlds like kelz n hov re-united* I'm slow wit it..so u hear ery word dat penetrates ya mind.... And Dis Collab Iz LIke Kellz And Hov...Jus an Audio CrimE! comin at u full force like we just blew up the throttle* I rep my crew...Sm's walkin down ur way...jus like super models* - -- -and that...iz werd.... More Ill. -Truth collabos on da way bitches |
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ima come with tha second link......damn D...fix my structure dawg.....lol....u should know how its really suppose to be
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aint that a bitch..........no1 wants to leave feedback
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decent drop.........pretty well written with tha back n forth format. thats somethin i havent seen in awhile especially not in here. structure could've been better tho and tha last punchline was kinda hard 2 follow. all in all tho its enjoyable so i give it a 7/10. RETURN THA FAVOR in my open mic Freestyle. thanx in advance........ 1
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5/10 vocab lacking work on it
punches ddit hit very hard flow was good thats about it |
Lost in Directions
Stress has kilt best to confess guilt in college we’re taught How to acknowledge fault, life not built on garbage we fought In hopes to taint gatts try acquaint cats with stuff to read Wear bling and share things, bring local facts into contact With plain brains of dudes and dames and make it a global act We let butter fly and utter a cry like Parkay and that sparks the way Greasy script got a sleazy grip on bread by Mary Jane draw art all day Have fun in parks let our big guns bark like RAMBO With AMMO shoot M60’s salute Bill Bixby cats get slam yo “So MADD we came with aggression just to gain possession Of microphones, to cats our profession unknown gave suggestions To the dumb weak from streets, we acquire fire from grammar And desire glamour to rock a stage in a hot rage and hammer Blaze and slander A crowd loud and proud get standing ovations” Make bargains don’t like fake margins like on line paper Blind vapor in your eyes as we pour vibes from design skyscrapers Onto sidewalks our pride talk while you all collide with chalk Anticipate your twisted fate leading you wrong into cornstalks Group nouns into a large menu formation and barge into conversation Like politicians in debate our ammunition is great here’s a demonstration |
^da fuck..fixing it mr. ill logic....sorry ..lol..i liked it fuck'd..:thumbup:
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its good............just hit enta after the *.................and its str8........
madrapper...ur a homo |
ay...dis was pretty dope 4real...im a nigga dat really like collabs and yall was on point...good topic and flow...vocab was aight but was still there...7/10...and dats real
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and make sure yall return tha fava in my colla wit -RIOT-...link in tha sig...~1~
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yea I was having a hard time follwoing this work on ur vocab and imagry but everything else was ok.
5.6/7 |
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