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My 1st Keystyle On Here!!!
i want sum feed on dis please 4real...
high octain, ryhme pattern new style// new shit, smooth shit dat stretch a whole mile// blaze caps like hay stacks, rollin witta pact// kill a nigga quicka than a runna on a track// nothin different, keystyle got my brain trippin// tipsy in tha club like underage hoes strippin// all ova tha place like Ma$e in his prime// or like "hotsause" and "tha professor" throwin dimes// like i said dis is new shit, send my dough straight to tha bank// up close and personal like a bullet at point blank// send a nigga to hell if his mouth get to yappin// strange look on my face like i've done too much rappin// caught in a bubble like a worm in a apple// tha newest to influence younger emcees like you// bringin nothin but heat every time i flow// da doors is now open, im finally here nigga, case closed// |
i really want some feedback on dis one yall 4real.....dis might be recorded, i wanna know how yall feel...~1~
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#1 Dont Type On Red Iss Anoyin
#2 Dont Use "/" Iss Wack Decent Multiz Ok Topic Nice Metaz 7/10 Good 1st Drop.................... |
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:laugh: good lookin cuz but red is my shit and tha "//" is how i write...but i guess they dont look right centered huh?....matta fact, imma change dat shit now.... :thumbup: |
Yo Rtf In Mih Open Mic Called Last Day Of School...........
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i got you my nig...
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Decent drop man aint too much here but being your first onei cansee you coming up in the ranks soon so keep it up !!! 6.5/10
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...good lookin^^^
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can i get some more feedz....
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ok - i was kinda feelin this - you had some decent punches also - 6/10
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