susan, susan...
 

dis just somethin i was thinkin bout, shit is crazy but kinda personal (tha name is edited for government reasons).......

i had a girl named susan, she loved to lick dick//
had her bent over more than once givin my nigga nook and shit//
she was freaky as hell, ass, tits and juicy lips//
and she was perfect on tha pole, doin tricks for tips//
but tha thing was wit susan, she asked for way too much//
usin me for a human dildo and a cash cow wit unlimited bucks//
she seemed to start gettin love struck, started pullin me and pullin me//
now im heated cuz a hoe keep callin me and callin me//
whats wrong wit dis picture? am i suppose to love her?//
am i suppose to give my all, wait a year and hitch her?//
hell fuck naw dawg, im a pimp and a hoe aint no housewife//
so i ditched susan for her cuzin, da nicer chick wit her own life//
im 17 she 19, we both got cars and real jobs//
and she not a tramp stripper dat give hand and blowjobs//
and she more mature, like i said she 19, susan was 16//
and i keep sayin "had" and "was" cuz susan died in a car accident last week//

yep...susan is dead and i eventually broke up wit her sister cuz....you know

u must drop a link with PROPER FEED-BACK with-in 24 hours or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

damn, can i get some feedz?

^^^good lookin cuz 4real

HA HA, he got in trouble! :laugh:

All Man That Was Right Off The Street For Real But Susan Must've Had Some Goos Pussy For You To Open Your Whole Billfold Like That Rip Susan

^^^yeah, her and her cuzin was good...but i moved on...its crazy...thanx though

and damn, how do i post a link on here?

Not bad stuff here i feel most of the emotion put into it that i think was emotion but the whole story vibe was on point could have been worded a little better but you are elevating i like to see that keep it up man 6.9/10 peace

yo...thanx alot cuz :thumbup:

and to tha mod...you can take that stuff out my thread man...i got links now, damn :laugh: