BForce_420 vs OptiKal
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines


No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

15 to win

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-12-05 at 10:08 PM

Must drop verse in 300 minutes after check in.

say what?
 

the 916 is where you'll find Optik selling hisself for tricks.
A lyrical bitch, wishin' he could make rent with his verbal spits
so, how did you find da boi rob on hotmales.com?
all your time jacking off, cock in sock, forgetting to drop bombs (pg.50)
Put down the vaseline, and stretch your limits
clean the seimen outta your ears and listen to your critics

BForce_420 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 11:54 PM.

the 916* is where you'll find Optik selling hisself for tricks.
A lyricless bitch, wishin' he could make rent with his verbal spits
so, how did you find da boi rob on hotmales.com?
all your time jacking off, cock in sock, forgetting to drop bombs (pg.50)
Put down the vaseline, and stretch your limits
clean the seimen outta your ears and listen to your critics


*see his prof*

wow im a fukin noob i first made 2 forums and then posted it as a message lololol bitch!

OptiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 02:29 AM.

ur lines is garbage why?,, u make optik take the trash out/
smak ya till ya bak out,,,u win nah,,,not even if i back out/
so why?... i dont get why u decide to spit these^^ jokes/
when in this batlle im like bush known to get the votes/
opitk known to slit ya throat an slice ya slim chance of hope/
right the fuk in half fuk a battle this be 420's first blood bath/
murderin this kat wit sharp lines that stab,penetrate ya heart an thats that.....frre verse spent 1 min on forgot bout the battle

voteS??????????????????

and it was 4 6 lines numbnuts

Voted For: OptiKaL

diz was a weak battle 2 look at but it goes like diz:
opena: bforce
vocab: optik
structure: optik
multis: optik
punches: optik
closa: optik

da win goes 2 optik

This was feedback posted for OptiKaL
 

chechim pollz.....................................

Voted For: OptiKaL

ur lines is garbage why?,, u make optik take the trash out/
smak ya till ya bak out,,,u win nah,,,not even if i back out/
decent punch
so why?... i dont get why u decide to spit these^^ jokes/
when in this batlle im like bush known to get the votes/
weak punch here wasn’t feelin it
opitk known to slit ya throat an slice ya slim chance of hope/
right the fuk in half fuk a battle this be 420's first blood bath/
punch was okay here, nuttin much but was aight

the 916* is where you'll find Optik selling hisself for tricks.
A lyricless bitch, wishin' he could make rent with his verbal spits
decent punch hardly was hard
so, how did you find da boi rob on hotmales.com?
all your time jacking off, cock in sock, forgetting to drop bombs (pg.50)
decent persona’s but weak punch
Put down the vaseline, and stretch your limits
clean the seimen outta your ears and listen to your critics
flow wasn’t long enuff, weak punch

overall Optikal took this one, punches were harder
structure was in place and the flow was good with it