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*DipSet* 01-10-05 09:23 AM

Drama Queen vs THE_GAME
 
Battle Rules:


10-20 lines,


topic = addicted


No Crew Votes


No Recycling


No Biting


3 day check


3 day drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-13-05 at 09:23 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-10-05 09:26 AM

THE_GAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 09:26 AM.

*DipSet* 01-10-05 11:52 AM

i'm in need of tha free drug's to keep me on my feet...
smokin got me where i'm goin... headin to tha point where i can't be beat...
physical strain? wat is that? i don't think i get it...
no...that's just medical... whenever i forget sh!t...
this here is wat's good for u... i need it to survive...
i got a job stressin me from 9 to 5...
wit every puff n sniff... i lose my cares...
can't get enuff of it... i need it to have a carreer...
but wait... who r u... u lookin rather familiar...
u holdin a sickle wit a grin... u must be my savior...
this is fact... no such thing as fiction...
watch ur back... or be attacked by addiction...

System 01-11-05 01:56 PM

Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 01:56 PM.

DQ 01-11-05 01:58 PM

The Spotlight

Center of attention,was always in the spotlight till that one night
Her parents decided to have another baby which was to her delight
That is until her sister arrived cause she wasn't number one anymore
She tried to adore,tried to ignore but no one heard her helpless roar
Her scream for love,a deep pain due to the loss of this natural drug
But they sweep it under the rug,not caring about her cry for one hug
Sat alone in her room,looking back at the good old times they shared
Scared of what will follow and doubting whether or not they ever cared
Terrified of becoming a failure,of letting everyone down once again
Going insane with hatred towards her sister,she wanted to entertain
Not that little perfect creature God created with stunning features
The personification of an angel,divine virgin to all them preachers
Decided to take fate in her own hands and handle this nasty situation
Took a pillow and wouldn't let go,combination of hate and frustration
Until she suddenly realized she was the one who caused this total mess
Addicted to appreciation,always trying to impress,be biggest success
She tried to release her sister but an obscure part kept on pressing
When she finally finished her task,she sighed:"life's such a blessing"

DQ

50Cal. 01-11-05 04:47 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

ok the game no good imagery or vocab here very sinplistic struture was off flow was ok but to win topicals you need imagery and yours wasnt there you just talked really and aint bring about no real vision 3/10
drama queen a little streched here but good struture made it easier to read much better vocab and a nice imagery also to it it gave a good story and picture which wins topicals i like the way the story constantly twisted and turned very good a 7/10

DQ 01-12-05 07:20 AM

^Thanks for vote, upping this stuff...it's not that extremly long to read so let the voting begin!

*DipSet* 01-12-05 10:00 AM

ya yall uppin for votes not much to read

DQ 01-12-05 04:33 PM

And up it goes...

Os1ris 01-12-05 07:43 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

Drama Queen wins this hand down good job fromboth emcees but her imagery wasmuch better aling with everything else peace

Hitchcock 01-12-05 11:49 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

dq won this battle pretty easy. her verse was pretty on point. vocab was way better, it flowed a lot better, and there was just more of altogether. i was just feelin her verse more it was real thorough. get at me
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DjPlAiMaKa 01-13-05 12:22 AM

Voted For: Drama Queen

This was close i honestly like both urs
opener- DramaQueen
Structure-DramaQueen
Flow- THe_Game
Punches-The Game
Closure- DramaQueen
I think they both were pretty good
But DQ u got my vote because u put way more feeling into it
I like that
Good Job both of u

*DipSet* 01-13-05 10:45 AM

ok uppin for votes got a felling that Os1ris vote was not long enough but drama if you dont like it you can deleate it its up t you

DQ 01-13-05 11:24 AM

Uhm, it doesn't matter to me really...it's your call whether or not you think it's a dishonest vote or not...Thanks for the votes btw, we'll return favor for sure!

Scareface 01-13-05 08:29 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

OMG Are You serious (to Game) OMG aii i gues I Have to Explain Myself

Drama Takes This WHOLE ENTIRE BATTLe no sweat no Strain Bcuz Everythang Had Her Specail Swang and Im tired of explaning Myself on Blow out Battles.............

Peace

Im out


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