Have I Ever Killed A Man ?!
 

i aint killed a man but if it ever crossed my mind
i wouldnt be scared, i was never soft inside
a fucked up life i thought id be better off to die
but i survived by scrappin now i forever lost my mind

crazy people dont know they crazy they believe they normal
but every once in awhile i can say i sorta - stray from normal
straight abnormal, and i dont think i can retrace my steps
replace my wrecks erase my mess so instead i stay distressed
mind way complex, like multi personality, i am a gemini
i did tattoo that to my neck didnt i ? cant remember why
that must a been my demented side trying to invent a guy
a man not as peaceful as i am but with an incentive drive

yah i got a hit list i mechanicly eliminate their names
my insanity intimidates the dame..incenerate remains
make sure my hit list never grows outta control
but im fair with it, I know how to compose a soul
I do tooth for tooth eye for eye take a value worth to me
never had to murder cuz a man never tried to murder me
so i aint killed a man, but if it ever crossed my mind
I wouldnt be scared, I was never soft inside

this was a nice piece homey...topic was good..stayed on point all the way through...rhymin was hot..some nice multies and the structure was nice.....some excellent vocab in there too....

straight abnormal, and i dont think i can retrace my steps
replace my wrecks erase my mess so instead i stay distressed

^^tht was a hot line..my favourite...

overall nice drop mayne..keep em comin..wun

return the favour with some feed in my open mic please..pz

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solid drop, im really busy but honestly, i will edit with a full feedback, cos i feel this piece deserves it.

if you never killed a man doesn't mean your soft.

but in rap it's best not to mention anything about it . . like dont say "i'm not a thug"

just dont say u killed no 1 that way u wont get hated if ur fake.... alot of fake rappers here.. if u aint got a gun dont rap about it simple... if u got aknief say u got a wepon dont tell them what specific weapon u got be smart.. n not fake.... if ur hard doesn't mean ur a killer... u could also refere ur self as being a hustla for an image.

yes i know but it was just something i was thinking about.. i've had weapons in the past.. and i dont think im a thug... i dont think im gangsta.. i think im me... and thats all i need to be to survive... but im saying i've nerver killed someone, but if it came down to it, i wouldnt be scared, i only put soft in there for a bit of imagery... but i feel what youre saying

Damn flow... Shoulda told me about this one, would have peeped it sooner...

Shit was sick as fuck... I swear to god these multies were off the hook... Fucking multi syllable rhymes twice a line, yeah, shit was most def. sick...

yah i got a hit list i mechanicly eliminate their names
my insanity intimidates the dame..incenerate remains
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I thought you were gonna say my insanity intimidates the game, but it still works, and this line was off the hook...

I like how you kept it short and simple, nice piece here...

9/10.

I do tooth for tooth eye for eye take a value worth to me
never had to murder cuz a man never tried to murder me
so i aint killed a man, but if it ever crossed my mind
I wouldnt be scared, I was never soft inside
^^^^does lines was hott but dis was a hott ass verse nice ass shit yo flow stayed on point all da time wow nuttin really to criticize you on man keep droppin