J DOT vs TopNotch
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-13-05 at 02:36 PM

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TopNotch has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 02:39 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 02:44 PM.

Its funny how these weak cats claim to be topnotch
But when tha bullets start firin, he’s jumpin like hopscotch
Ur not hot, u got caught, I left u with knot spots
U just wack, u’ll get slapped, like luda just “get back”

Stay in yo boundaries rookie, I fade careers like JAY
I heard u play with BARBIE DOLLS; I think that’s pure gay
U always in “Members Mug shots”, probably thinking of KEN
Since the population of RV is 90 percent men

What you lookin for dude?....Boys Gone Wild
I’ll leave yo whole career blank, just like yo profile
Yo whole style is so foul, and u know that now
I’ll SNAP this nigga quick, where’s yo KODAK smile

Like fat and skinny on a seesaw, this battle is one-sided
Like big people verse small, we both done collided
Yo whole verse?........pre-write it
…..or J DOT’ll ignite it………
Gang up tha biggest LOOGY ever, and u still “BITE SPITS”

If merkin cats is bad, LORD FORGIVE MY SIN
This nigga topnotch don’t know what he just got in
…This battle is all me, so I’m prepared to win
Cause I punt fake niggas like its 4th and 10

thiz kinda weak but it should take CARE j DOT

this punk nigga elavating(fly) in rap not even r. kelly could belive*
i make ya have sumtin in common with ya parents u'd wish u wasent concived(born)
Nigga wanted to no if he could win the battle so he went and asked jeeves
the answer was a loss would be his poor tale
i kick him & mom 2 da corner and slap a tag on they back that says "for sale"
put a shell in bum for pick his food out my dumpster
got the hoe afraid of the dark im his buggie munster
but i dont hide under da bed hit ya wit razor flows that cut ya head raw
have u callin my bullets gum cuzz they stick 2 ya jaw
when this fag dickrides is da only tyme he on the ball
i walk tall and rule the sac lands
when he started dis battle he was damned like he was struck wit curse
i could scribe the words in his retina but he still couldn't see my verse

* I BELIVE I COULD FLY SONG

uppin for votez pplz...................................

Voted For: J DOT

J Dot got this all da way....
punches- J had dat. he relle focused on his punches although ur last four lines wasnt nice man, chill wit dat
personals- J took dis too, look at this line:
Yo whole verse?........pre-write it
…..or J DOT’ll ignite it………
Gang up tha biggest LOOGY ever, and u still “BITE SPITS”
^dat was serious yo
structure- Top had dat. yo j u gotta work on ya structure pardna.
o.v/ j dot took dis, because of his hard punches and killa personals

p.s- RTF

oh...and this dudes not a newb...he's a alias....uppin this.........

Voted For: J DOT

aight this was oen sided but still not all that great


TYOP: you have flow...should do audio becuz text is not for you......so try and get hooked up on audio...but yeah no real good punches and it was boring.......but good shit......i remeber when i merked you......you just needed to elevate alot...

J: you where alot btter than ive seen from you.....Ithinkyou might be the best text battler at NEW TECH...but yeah good spit....your opener had me from the start........
it got borign towards the end...like your text style just try to make every line hella niuce....but good spit

JDOT gets my vote becuz his opener killed your whole verse

upppin this.................uppin this.............again....^GOOD LOOKIN FOLKS.........topnotch-i told u, u werent better than me

uppin this again.............


50 characters is gay...

Voted For: J DOT

man diz shit waddant even close whoade j dot wrecked dis shit i mean he had SYCK flow and shit and multis and metaphors out the asshole diz guy is basically one of the best here i mean i cant even think of where he got all that shit from. topnotch was OK but was way too simple if he watns to hang with jo dot. j dot keep doin ya thang and top notch keep workin on ya punches.
v-jdot
RTF wit the links in mah sig please cuz i want em to be over they easy votes

Voted For: J DOT

J DOT took this one...punches were kinda hard hittin and landed, the flow was pretty decent, kinda lack'd a little though, structure was good & in place too, and nice multi's too...that took it here to get u tha win though

T.N. i wasnt much feelin your drop here....punches were really landin & all, ur structure was a little stretched makin the flow unbalanced, but overall elevate a little more tho and work on yo punches + structure

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Voted For: J DOT

YO LIKED THA BAR LINE KEPT ITS CATCH
INTERESTIN PIECE BROTHA MAN KEEP IT UP
GOTTA HAVE SHIT LIKE YOURS AN MINE OUT THERE
FOR PEPS TA SEE AN UNDERSTAND LITTLE THINGS THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT PEOPLE LIKE YOU AN ME HOLLA BACK CB83