Need Some Feedback Please
 

Whaddup 17 year old MC havent been rhymin very long. check out my songs or w/e and drop some conmstructive feedback. if u hate please give a reason dont just say it sux. Aight peace out


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/stezmusic.htm

Lets see.....

1.Flow-Its ok, On point...mostly
2.Emotion- Its pretty good, slightly mono.
3.Delivery- I thought it was nice.
4.Lyrics- Pretty corny. Who cares if u a cracker. Its nuttin new.

Make sure you leave feedback on other songs.
Or Seven n Phenom will Lock-n-Delete This.-1

ur lyrics suck.. omg so basic, like 3rd grade level at best lol
flow was OK, quality was average, delivery was OK... overall 5/10 LYRICS NOT GOOD lol
but ull learn and elevate...hopefully lol
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lol thanks for the feed... im guessin yall listenein to the first song only based on comments



Yea ill definetly check out other peoples shit im just new here


peace

ya chorus for the first link-Whoo Bangin.. = :nono: i wasn't feeling that, you have a good voice for the beat.. emotion was ok... delivery was str8.. but work on ya lyrics they sound extra basic.. like "this is my sheet, i fold it up neat".. it's kinda too simple... and when i say simple i don't mean go run to get the dictionary that won't help, ya know.. just find a creative way to say things without going str8 to the point.. use metaphors some word-play, maybe a few multis..