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Kordozar vs Imagine.
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Imagine. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 10:03 PM.
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 10:09 PM.
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Aiight, look.
Kor needs a life & you know it's sad when His IQ is the same as his post per day average Kid excess baggage, he's wack & the truth's cold A veteran? nah, far from it man... ya just old Couldn't spit fire with flamin' Cheetos in your sandwich & it's sad how ya whole revolves around ya band..........width Kor's a fat fuck who only types, but no one's seen Sits roun' drinking yoo-hoo to be less of an Ovaltine Dude's on the road to nowhere & he's riding shotgun Did a search for your dopest verse, but you ain't got none! Later. |
In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers...
He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders.. Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat.. Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat.. ..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle.. He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle... Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win.. He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men.. If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit.. Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic.. **Expla's** His Aim Name GangstaWalrus Wants Ta Be A Proffesional Rapper Imed Me Harrasin Me Frisco San Fransisco 49ers Wont Get A Win Thiss Year Live In Tha Bay Area Which Is Close Ta Frisco His Religion Is Agnostic,Which Means He's In Tha Middle With Tha Belief Of God |
Damn I Fucked Mih Strukture Up...................
In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers... He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders.. Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat.. Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat.. ..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle.. He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle... Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win.. He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men.. If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit.. Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic |
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Voted For: Kordozar
lol, VERY VERY VERY CLOSE BATTLE AND IM FUCKIN SURPRISED. Kordozor man u did not put on ur best performance at all...man dat is disappointin punches-Imagine- he killed u dere man personals- K- he had the nice personals, his whole verse was personals...lol vocab- none of yall, work on dat K wordplay-K- had the better wordplay, every word flowed structure- imagine had dis. he had the way betta verse structure wise. it was very fuckin wasy to read, but ur structure was sumwhere else man. but none da less K got da victory. nice try ROOK, but ur imaginary took u to far. no hate but he beat u. v/ K |
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actually, his personals were fake. i had better wordplay, he didn't have any. flow is not the same as wordplay man. uppin again..... ......leave links. |
How Are Personals Fake,Tole Me This Ya Self On Aim...............
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you did use fake personals.
i don't live in San Francisco. i don't want to be a professional rapper. vote. leave links. up. |
Voted For: Kordozar
Both had good flow and structure in their verse, Kordozar had slightly better vocab though. I'll give you the full breakdown... Kordozar In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers... He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders.. ^first line is cool, 2nd bleh Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat.. Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat.. ^hehe,good good! ..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle.. He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle... ^2nd line kinda played but still nice though Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win.. He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men.. ^lolz, funny... If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit.. Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic.. ^nice closer Had some nice creative punches n personals in there, solid drop! Imagine. Kor needs a life & you know it's sad when His IQ is the same as his post per day average ^funny opener Kid excess baggage, he's wack & the truth's cold A veteran? nah, far from it man... ya just old ^first line's bleh,2nd's good Couldn't spit fire with flamin' Cheetos in your sandwich & it's sad how ya whole revolves around ya band..........width ^hehe, nice one! Kor's a fat fuck who only types, but no one's seen Sits roun' drinking yoo-hoo to be less of an Ovaltine ^not really feeling this one actually... Dude's on the road to nowhere & he's riding shotgun Did a search for your dopest verse, but you ain't got none! ^uhm, guess it'll do Kinda fell of in the end...too bad...cause you had some funny stuff in there, nice punches n personals, vocab might be lil better but it's good man! Still my vote goes to Kordozar cause i was feeling his verse a lil more, was straight from beginning till end where you fell off a lil near the end...Try to keep spitting hot fire throughout whole verse, was hard one to decide...no hate... |
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