yall tell me wat u think
 

a lot of niggaz do a lot of talkin/ i aint wit all that lock pickin i hit you bitch ass while you parkin/ here da hammer go cock I stick in ya fore/ they ask me how u do these late night bids? I spit it in his jaw/niggaz geed up of a lil bit a dro/ you a superwoman i split yo head open like lil mo/ dont wait to my shit drop/ i never said i make hip hop i said i make ya fukin hip pop/ i cant deny it, im bout gettin the cheese/ i let this tek take a shit on knees/ and anyone whoever want the gaps to they face/ fuk wit me i have ya walkin around wit handicapped plates!

yea u know this is a lil bit of my good stuff but i aint battlin nobody so i cant rip like i want to so yall just holla back and i do my thing from there

sorry to dissapoint cha sunny..but if thats your good flow..damn..you gotta produce way better than that dog..i know your cappable of coming harder..you got to..so all in all..im sayin' thats wack..no dissin..jus bein' honest..so keep practicin..it's gon take time though.

*checkk out my two freestyle post..homeboy.i'd appreciate it

I don't know man it doesn't make much sence but you can work on it

dont worry bout that criticismcuz..its just that thers not a whole lott of catz on this board thats into g shit...
i was feelin that spit
i gotta give you some advice though
you was talkin bout this is some of your good shit and you aint down to battle nobody...
on this board you have to have confidence in all your shit and not show any weakness or these niggaz will eat you up on that tip

anywayz elevate....keep spittin....and stay up son
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