SenseR - Shoot'em Up
 

ayo this a track i have in the works right now and want yall to peep it and let me know what yall think of it...like should i continue makin the song..cuz some cats tellin me the beat horrible and that i should save this verse for another track..so if ya can peep it and holla back at me..1ne..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/bronxskidmusic.htm


Lyrics

if niggas bringin nonsense start cockin and// shoot'em up <~x3 what!
if u see niggas plottin start poppin and// shoot'em up <~x3 what!


bitch niggas dont wanna beef cuz im quick to cock//
quick ta spot the bitch ta pop, spit the glock//
i spit whats not fiction you guys best listen///
my nines spittin if ya type is snitchin//
for riches i isnt one to play wit//
im pumpin the gauges that'll have ya lungs cave in//
if i aim them at cha back//
i know niggas that'll laugh at that cuz you'll fly like acrobats//
and if i dont get my cash real fast//
my task is blast to have ya ass dash from gats//
a massive gap will be left in ya chest//
if ya B-S'ing wit Sense bet the pain'll be intense when i Bx represent//
so pest dont fool wit us best prove ya bust//
tools ya tuck or move and duck//
cuz guns we got numerous//
for foolish fucks who humerous we dont front we shoot'em up//


if niggas bringin nonsense start cockin and// shoot'em up <~x3 what!
if u see niggas plottin start poppin and// shoot'em up <~x3 what!
and no stoppin even though they droppin// shoot'em up <~x3 what!
vans unlockin its perfect timin ta// shoot'em up <~x3 what!

1ne,..

man...save the verse for somethin else...y does it sound spacey??

lol.....

quality is ass............but flow and emotion is tight hook is good its hard to listen to cause its souunds like your underwater......maybe its just my comp

why did you post this i told you it sounds horrible and use the verse from something else damn cubans is hardheaded:(im gonna clap you soon as you get back just for this;)

whoever told you to switch the beat is right... that beat sound like someone shot it in the rib and left it for dead... chorus idea is correct- ur vocals are a little low, but that beat just sound all sorts of fucked up... 1

sounds like a timewarp... back and forth.......

iight..lol good looks on the feed..i knew the beat was weird..oh well i finished the track i'll just finish recordin it and throw the song some where in the stash wit the other 178 songs or so...but yeah good looks yall 1ne..