A Mind On Rhymes..(Unfinished Song)
 

This Song Has A Mini-Scene In It..And Im Not Finished With It..So If U Have Any Ideas Then lemme Know..The 2nd Verse Isn't Done..And The Chorus is Sung Kinda Slow..So Blah..Pz..

The Red Font Is The Doctor Talkin..

The Blue Font Is The Nurse Talkin..


(Chorus x1)
Fuck A Brain On Drugs...Let Me Show You A Mind On Rhymes...And You Thought Drugs Fried..? Let Me Show You A Mind On Rhymes...Cause In A Mind On Rhymes What’s Wrong Is Right...And You Can Say Goodbye To Brain Cells...Cause They’re Replaced By Multiple Mics...Fuck A Overdose...With A Mind On Rhymes You Don’t Even Know When Your Gonna Lose Your Life…


Fuck Drugs..! I’ll Wrap The Whole Damn Alphabet In A Blanket...
Then Smoke It Or Shoot It Up My Veins And Start Hellucinatin’...
Totally Passed Out After Spittin...Rushed To The E.R...Wonderin’ If I’ll Make It...
“Damnit...Doctor I’m Not Gonna Lose Another Patient..!”
“Mr. Robinson...Hurry And Start The Surgical Mind Removal Operation..!”
"Hurry You Jack - Ass...Soon We Won’t Be Able To Save Him..!”
Then They Started The Operation...But I Woke Up Just In Time...
“What The Fuck..! You Guys Aint Takin’ My Mind..!”
But They Wouldn’t Listen...So I Started Spittin Like No One You’ve Ever Witnessed...
Then Verbally Murdered Them Both With My Sick Spits..!
These Fuckin’ Rhymes Got Me Trippin’...Doctors Tryna Take Me...
When I Enter The Battle Field All Emcees Run Screamin...“No please..! Don’t Rape Me..!”
You Can’t Make Me Stop...Or The Consumers Of Rhymes...
You Mine As Well Join...Or You Mine As Well Die..!


(Chorus x1)
Fuck A Brain On Drugs...Let Me Show You A Mind On Rhymes...And You Thought Drugs Fried..? Let Me Show You A Mind On Rhymes...Cause In A Mind On Rhymes What’s Wrong Is Right...And You Can Say Goodbye To Brain Cells...Cause They’re Replaced By Multiple Mics...Fuck A Overdose...With A Mind On Rhymes You Don’t Even Know When Your Gonna Lose Your Life…


Rhymes Tight And Compressed...My Raps Never Slightly Contempt...
I’m So Addicted To Spittin’ The Judge Put Me On Mic Arrest...
(Too Be Continued)

daamnn, I'm lovin this, you gotta finish dawg!

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yo tis was really a nice piece i gotta give u props for it keep it up

im still waitin for ur verse playa if u dont have by 12 midnight ur time ur dqed aight i can only give u so much time aight

man this shit tight but I think you can render the chorus a little tighter

Thanx For The Replies..Dont Worry Acidic..I'll Post Up..I Jus Been Busy..Pz..

Damn kidd im feelin this all the way...
it was fuckin funny you got a strange mind son
pure siccness..i cant wait till this shit is done

In the meanwhile you should really peep the ill colb that a nigga did with Lack of logic and acidic

Thanx For The Replies..I'll Peep It^..Pz..

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aww shit kicko nice shit gotta hear it on audio!! a mos def on audio keep it up kicko...........heads high

Thanx For The Reply..Uppin..!

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