babies laha-bye
 

When the night is cold,
Daddy will be here holding you bold.
When daddy and mommy seem to be scared,
I will be here warming you like ten flares,
When bad news is in this world,
When you're ten daddy will not take you on wirled.


Times will seem tough,
But keep you're head up high little soilder so you wont bluff.
Others will try to hurt you at school.
But all I have to say is do not take no ones bull.
You are in my arms as I craddle you the small child,
but as every second goes by I only know that it is my dial.
So as I lay you to bed I sing you the baby laha-bye.




Feedback peace

good stuff, flow was good
idea too
keep it up

I will trying to get known on my poetry up in her but yea lookin for more feedback.