Lil Avenger vs cheerios
 

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Check in by: 01-15-05 at 05:16 PM

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Lil Avenger has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 05:17 PM.

Cheerios has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 05:25 PM.

You' a skinny dude man are you straight fasting or what
You aint trackin shit so u lackin big stuff you act hard
.........but ur worst than 'Trina' tryna back shit up
You think u light middle or u think u 10 times heavy weight
You know im not gay this aint a dat im rejectin
.........you faster than if u tried out for 'chrime sindicate'
Theres been the wait Im the tightest u aint kno what im about
You stay gettin more sperm in ya face than
.........honey nut cheerios in babys mouth's
Not me dude u think that man u juss a scorn kid
You're verse doesn't provide Sick like u was
.........watchin a chineses porn flick


done with this newB

your bitch ass cant compete or keep up with my rhymes and you aint never gunna make it cause your all out of time

and by the time youhit the stage ill be long gone and famous while your bitch ass back home getting fucked in the anus
my flows are illmatic and my beats are erratic with a tempo so perfect you can say they mathmatic
now my flows commin at you wit a knock so hard they make your erect dick look like a half smoked cigar
man you called cheerios and you sponsered by kelloggs man my flows will swallow you whole just like a full cup of egg nog
so put the mic down and walk away from the game cause even your dumb ass know that all your verses are gay
so turn around walk away and dont you ever look back cause all us other rappers know that your punk ass cant rap
Fuck You bitch

Voted For: Lil Avenger

Both ya garbage i beat yea eazy

ya ll need betta structure and really stepp up ya punclinez

quit using played out gay jokez

but i give da win 2 lil avenger his verse flowed a bit better

both ya step it up

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yo cheerios yo raps was off and u need 2 flow betta so bring it up homie

fuck u pussie ass faggot u actin like good and all u booty bitch

Voted For: Lil Avenger

Lil avenger
u got this Ez, ur vocab was reall simple though, ur flow were aiight
and ur punches were pretty dope. None of u had much personals, and u didnt have any metas.
Cherios
Ur flow was wack dogg, ur punches were weak as fuck
In other words
U need elevatin to do

return the favor dogg
me vs dio deus

ok TopNotch is his alias dumbass u can't fuckin get a way with cheatin i allready reported u to strobe so have a good time remakein another damn alias :thumbup:

Voted For: Lil Avenger

naw bro cherrios, avenger done wit u

in pnches-lil avenger
flow-cherrios
vocab-avenger
multies-avenger

u came iitt cherrios but avenger in my mind took u out hard, but good job to both of ya
much respect 2 both

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This was feedback posted for Cheerios
 

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