Freestyle: Spit For Spit
 

Taking The Last Breathes Of A First Step
Im Comin Through Fearless
Fuck The Massive Stress
Cuz If Deez Complete Strangers
Is Riskin They Lives
Just So You And I
Can Stay Safe From All Dem
Foriegn Speaking
Terror Seekin
Villian Fiends
Takin Planes And Trains
And
Crashin Into Massive Trades
Just To Make Change
Causin All Deez Terror Scenes
Makin MotherFuckin Children Scream
Is That What Ya Seek
Is This The Kind Of Victory
That Will Make Peace
I Dont Need This Shit On Mind
I Got Enough Trouble Makin Rhymes
Wit Out Gettin Charged Wit Crimes
Cuz Spit For Spit
Ill Show To You
The Sad And Sinsiter Truth
Comin Str8 From A Misfit Youth
The Product Of Too Much Anger
Balled Up Inside
And
The Result Of A Loveless Child
Not Scared To Die
Cuz People I Dont Dare Cry
I Take Every Fuckin Bit Of Critisism
And
I Toss It Aside
Ya'll Motherfuckers Are Gonna Have To Lock Me Outside
And
Fuckin Eat Me Alive
Before Dis Mother Fucker Ever Says Die
Cuz Ima Try And Try
Til You Motherfuckers
Dont Refuse And Elude
The Fact That You Might
Like Dis Shit Dat Im Spittin To You
Cuz Spit For Spit
Yall Can All Hold My Dick
Til Sun Fades To Black
Cuz Im Still Funna Be
Running My Lip
Cuz Im Still Funna Be
Talking My Shit
Cuz Im Still Gonna Be Here
Holdin My Dick
And What...
Uh...
What Now...
What You Gotz Dat I Cant Top
Cuz Im Still Gonna Be Around
Til Im On Life Support
And
Fuckin God Is Holdin Me Down
You Cant Stop Me
You Cant Win...

if this genuinely a freestyle then its tight. it all just seemed to fall into place. the vocab was a bit simple but i dont expect ya to be usin 3-4 syllable words throughout in a freestyle. just try changin the subject cos we've heard it all b4 but still check mine ninja philosophy aight peace

it's alright for a freestyle it's a little different on the style the way you typed it out but aside from that it's pretty dope